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Dear Newspaper,

as we all have seen in the last days there is a new fad at our school: "The Wave-Movement" promises equallity, peace and fairness among its members and that is not a lie. All students owning a yellow card stay together like a group and do not talk to not-members anymore, so if you do not join "The Wave" you loose all friends and end up alone. This is the biggest problem about it, members do not accept other students anymore, they beat them up and robb them. What started as an experiment turned out to be the greatest mistake of all time, last tuesday the first student got killed by bottle thrown in his face. I beg the headmaster to stop this horror, all parents are worried and got already attacked too for saving non-members out of fights....


Thx for reading

[Keswick (Contributor)]

Dear newspaper,

as we all have seen in the last days there is a new fad at our school: "The Wave-Movement" promises equality, peace and fairness among its members and that is not a lie. All students carry a yellow card stay together like a group and do not talk to not-members anymore, so if you do not join "The Wave" you loose all friends and end up alone. This is the biggest problem about it, members do not accept other students anymore, they beat them up and rob them. What started as an experiment turned out to be the greatest mistake of all times, last Tuesday the first student was killed by bottle thrown in his face. I beg the headmaster to stop this horror, all parents are worried and got already attacked too for saving non-members out of fights.... *


Thanks for reading

* was meinst du damit?

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das Eltern als Sie nicht-mitgliedern aus kämpfen halfen auch angegriffen wurden.....

ist "was kill by bottle" richtig? fehlt kein a??

[Keswick (Contributor)]

Dear newspaper,

as we all have seen in the last days there is a new fad at our school: "The Wave-Movement" promises equality, peace and fairness among its members and that is not a lie. All students carry a yellow card stay together like a group and do not talk to not-members anymore, so if you do not join "The Wave" you loose all friends and end up alone. This is the biggest problem about it, members do not accept other students anymore, they beat them up and rob them. What started as an experiment turned out to be the greatest mistake of all times, last Tuesday the first student was killed by a bottle thrown in his face. I beg the headmaster to stop this horror, all parents are worried and some were attacked for trying to save non-members from fights....


Thanks for reading

There you go, pet.

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yippy 2nd part will follow soon

Thank you