Urlaubsplan.....

[Ogi81]

Hallo, kann bite einer sagen, ob das so ok. wäre?

1.At the first day the tour begin with arriving in New York and you check in in the hotel Pennsylvania. After them you have dinner in the hotel restaurant and a walk allong the Time Square.
2.After the Breakfast you visit the Miss Liberty on the Eillis Island Then you can visit the China Town or you can relax in the Center Park. After the dinner you see NY from above, because you get tickets for the Rockefeller Center.
3.The NY Bustour begin at the 9.00 o’clock. It takes about 5 hours. You see 12 places of interest. After them you can have a shoppig in the largest Shopping Center of New York.
4.The trip go away to Toronto.
After you check in in the hotel “Sun Buillding” you visit the Niagara Falls.
5.This day is a relaxday for you. You can spent it how you like.

[Keswick (Contributor)]

Hallo, kann bitte einer sagen, ob das so ok. wäre?

1. The first day the tour begins with arriving in New York and checking into the hotel Pennsylvania. After that you will have dinner in the hotel restaurant and a walk along the Time Square.
2. After the breakfast you will visit the Statue of Liberty on the Eillis Island. Then you can visit the China Town or you can relax in the Center Park. After the dinner you will see New York from above, because you will get tickets for the Rockefeller Center.
3. The New York bus tour will begin at the 9 o’clock. It will take about 5 hours. You will see 12 places of interest. After that you can go a shopping in the largest shopping center in New York.
4.The trip go away to Toronto. (Der Trip geht weg nach Toronto? Oder meinst du, dass ein Trip nach Toronto fuehrt? One trip will lead you to Toronto.
After checking into the hotel “Sun Buillding” you will visit the Niagara Falls.
5. This day will be a relaxing day for you. You can spend it however you like.

[schnip]

Tolle Korrektur, eine Frage in eigener Sache: Ich habe noch nie "go a shopping" gehört....wie wird das denn allgemein benutzt? Und in welchem Land vorrangig..

Greetings

[Keswick (Contributor)]

Das verwendet man in den Faellen, wenn Keswick vergisst es wegzustreichen!

After that you can go a shopping in the largest shopping center in New York

Habe ich damit erledigt. Danke dir schnip!

[Ogi81]

vielen lieben Dank....
Im Satz 4. meinte ich eigentlich, dass der Trip geht weiter nach Toronto.

[schnip]

Vielleicht könntest du "The trip goes on to Toronto." nehmen oder "The next stop on the trip is Toronto."

[Keswick (Contributor)]

Oder du laesst es bei meiner Verbesserung, der Trip fuehrt dich/euch/Sie nach Toronto. Die Bedeutung ist im Prinzip dieselbe.