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Guten Abend, hier mal zwei frei formulierte Texte,die für mich eine Übung sind.
Falls möglich bitte mal ansehen und korrigieren
Herzlichen Dank von Jens. An enjoyable evening at the theatre
Last Sunday we had seen the amazing musical “Elizabeth” in our theatre on Eisenach.
Saint Elisabeth of Hungary is a Hungarian Catholic saint, princess of Hungary. According to tradition, she was born in the castle of Sárospatak, Hungary, on July 7, 1207. She was the daughter of King Andrew II of Hungary and Gertrude of Andechs Merania, and at age four was brought to the court of the rulers of Thuringia in Central Germany, to become a future bride who would reinforce political alliances between the families. Elisabeth was married at the age of fourteen, widowed at twenty, relinquished her wealth to the poor, built hospitals, and became a symbol of Christian charity in Germany and elsewhere after her death at the age of twenty-four.
The performance starts at 7.
Shooting star Sabrina Weckerlin as actor “Elisabeth” is very young and nice. She had a beautiful voice and here performing was very well.
Our theatre has an enormous variety of music and plays. We had a very entertaining evening.
The performance was sold out.
I have got a reduction for two tickets with my student card for us. My friend’s girl was enthusiasm.
2)
One of the worst open air concerts I’ve never forgotten.
This was a concert with a legendary music group Barkley James Harvest.
The concert was sold out. Many people have waiting on a hot summer evening
of a big music group. The group were comes to late. The audience didn’t like it.
Les Holroyd walked off stage. He was eventually persuaded to go back.
Beer and non-alcoholic drinks were sell out.
Certain elements were belligerent because she can not listen one of a biggest hits “Hymn”.
The tickets were very expensive for one hour music with big technical problems.
:)

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Brisgen hat geschrieben:Guten Abend, hier mal zwei frei formulierte Texte,die für mich eine Übung sind.
Falls möglich bitte mal ansehen und korrigieren
Herzlichen Dank von Jens.

An enjoyable evening at the theatre
Last Sunday we saw (went to see) the amazing musical “Elizabeth” in our theatre in Eisenach.
Saint Elisabeth of Hungary is a Hungarian Catholic saint, princess of Hungary. According to tradition, she was born in the castle of Sárospatak, Hungary, on July 7, 1207. She was the daughter of King Andrew II of Hungary and Gertrude of Andechs Merania, and at age four was brought to the court of the rulers of Thuringia in Central Germany, to become a future bride, who would reinforce political alliances between the families. Elisabeth was married at the age of fourteen, widowed at twenty, relinquished her wealth to the poor, built hospitals, and became a symbol of Christian charity in Germany and elsewhere after her death at the age of twenty-four.
The performance started at 7.
Shooting star Sabrina Weckerlin as acting as “Elisabeth” is very young and nice. She has a beautiful voice and here performance was very good.
Our theatre has an enormous variety of music and plays. We had a very entertaining evening.
The performance was sold out.
I have got a concession for two tickets with my student card for us. My friend’s girl (das Maedchen deines Freundes?) was enthusiastic.
2)
One of the worst open air concerts I’ll never forget.
It was a concert with the legendary music group Barkley James Harvest.
The concert was sold out. Many people waited for the big band on a hot summer evening. The group were comes too late. The audience didn’t like it. Les Holroyd walked off stage. He was eventually persuaded to go back. Beer and non-alcoholic drinks were sold out. Certain people were belligerent because they could not listen to one of a biggest hits “Hymn”. The tickets were too expensive for one hour music with big technical problems.
:)