Kleine Stadtbeschreibung!

[Hunter001]

Hi Leute lern grad englisch.

Könnt ihr schauen ob die Grammatik stimmt?

25.ooo inhabtiants live in this place.
The place is situated near berlin.
In this place you can go into a sport club, you can go shopping or you can go into the cinema.
´Velten is a little town with a big train station.
The place has two big enterprices: the bombadier and the Stahlwerk.
In velten are many people froum other countries for example russians.
The name of the mayor is **** *****.
A very interesting building in velten is the shopping centre near the train station.
The place has 4 schools.
it is a green city and around Velten is a big forrest.



LG

[Keswick (Contributor)]

Hi Leute, lerne gerade Englisch.

Könnt ihr schauen ob die Grammatik stimmt?

25.000 inhabitants live in this place.
The place is situated near Berlin.
In this place you can visit a sport club, you can go shopping or you can go to the cinema.
Velten is a little town with a big train station.
The place has two big enterprises: the Bombadier and the Stahlwerk.
Many many people from other countries, for example Russians, live in Velten.
The name of the mayor is **** *****.
A very interesting building in Velten is the shopping centre near the train station.
The place has 4 schools.
It is a green city and around Velten there is a big forest.

Woerterbuch verwenden! Satzbau beachten. Schreibe den Text in fliessenden Text um und versuche Synonyme fuer place zu finden. Staedtenamen, Laendernamen, Nationalitaeten etc. schreibt man gross.

[Hunter001]

Mir gehts nicht um die Rechtschreibung.
Nur ob der Satzbau stimmt...

[Keswick (Contributor)]

Nein, wie du in der Verbesserung siehst. Und der Ausdruck ist auch eher schlecht als recht. Selbst wenn du den Vortrag muendlich halten musst, wuerde ich dich bitten vor dem Posten deiner Beitraege ein Woerterbuch zu Rate zu ziehen.