ganz kurze ZUsammenfassung korrigieren bitte!

[Cathi]

Hi! Könnt ihr bitte diesen kurzen Text kontrollieren! Soll ganz kurze Zusammenfassung sein um was es in einem Text geht. Danke


The Text "The trouble with Mother", is about a family, in which count strict rules. The daughters of the family don't get along with them. At the time when the oldest daughter moved out the other girl has to live with the aftermath. Now the life for the other daughter became stricter. She has to tell everything he mom when she go out, because her mother can't trust her.

[Keswick (Contributor)]

Meine letzte gute Tat vor dem langen Wochenende .

Hi! Könnt ihr bitte diesen kurzen Text kontrollieren! Soll ganz kurze Zusammenfassung sein um was es in einem Text geht. Danke


The text "The trouble with Mother", is about a family, in which count strict (Ich verstehe hier nicht, was du meinst.) rules. The daughters of the family don't get along with them (mit wem verstehen sie sich nicht?). From the time when the oldest daughter moves out the other girl has to live with the aftermath of the move. Now the life for the other daughter became even stricter. She has to tell her mom everything, for example when she goes out, because her mother can't trust her. (ihre Mutter kann ihr nicht vertrauen? Ohne Grund? Oder meinst du, dass die Mutter ihr einfach nicht vertraut. Ohne Grund. Das waere dann: because her mother doesn't trust her)

[Kalecia]

Ich denke der erste Teil sollte etwa heißen (wenn es so gemeint war)


The text "The trouble with Mother" is about a family that relies on strict rules. The daughters of the family don't get along with each other.



Rest wurde ja schon verbessert

[Keswick (Contributor)]

Danke Kalecia, gedacht habe ich mir das schon, aber ich frage lieber statt zu raten, bevor ich mich in die Nesseln setze .