Hausaufgabe, bitte um Hilfe/Korrektur

[Ogi81]

Hallo an alle,
bitte hilft mir meine Hausaufgabe zu kontrollieren. Ich müsste einfach nur wissen, ob die Sätze grammatisch richtig sind. Es ist viel, aber vielleicht findet jemand einwenig zeit um mir zu helfen.
Viele Dank.

LG Ogi

Aufgabe 2

Dear mother,
I’m still here in New York and I want to tell you about a happening.
At six o’ clock yesterday I was eating my supper. Suddenly a young girl came in and smiled at me. It was Jenny Fischer. I was very surprised.
She looks very nice. Her blond hair is very long and she is tall and slender.
Jenny lives and works in New York. She is a model. She told me about her family.
When her father died in 2001 her mother took her and her sister Lea to New York.
From 2001 to 2005 she attended a Highschool and now she is at the NYU and has a model job to earn a little extra pocket money.
Jenny told me that she has not to work now and I invited her to stay with me for a week.
We are going to visit her family on Wednesday. Tomorrow afternoon we want to play tennis.
Jenny has two tickets for the Broadway Theatre for next Monday. I’m so happy to meet her.
I think, we will enjoy our common time.
I’m going to come home next month.
Give my love to father and grandma.

Best wishes,
Your daughter Olga

Aufgabe 4:

a). I always get up at 5. o’clock.
My daughter is sometimes allowed go to school by my new car.
I have never seen such a beautiful face.
I often visit my best friend in the hospital.

b). When the robber saw the policeman he ran quickly into the garden.
c). Yesterday I drove my son to London.
d). He is late for two hours because he is busily experimenting with his computer.
e). One afternoon I saw my teacher drunken walking very slowly down the road.

Aufgabe 5:

Last Weekend we had a excursion to a zoo. We, that’s my husband, myself und our two nieces.
The day began very nice. The weather was wonderful and we all enjoyed our drive with my new car. The zoo is in hannover and it removed 95 km from us so we had to drive about two hours. We had better taken some entertainment with us.
When we were in Hannover we had a flat tire. My husband tried to stop the car but it was unpossible, because there were to much cars.
He decided to drive to the next bus stop. The tire was exchanged by my husband there.
We all were irriteted very much but we were able to look forward to the zoo.
We reached the zoo one hour later and we planed to stay there for about four hours.
It was very nice there. The children liked it too and they were very pleased. They cannot stop talking about the trip. I was glad to hear it.
About four hours later we left the zoo and drove at home.
During the drive we minded at our tire.
We reached our house one and a half hour later. When we are eating for dinner we remembered our trip. We all think that it was worth visiting the zoo.

[Arminius]

Hallo an alle,
bitte hilft mir meine Hausaufgabe zu kontrollieren. Ich müsste einfach nur wissen, ob die Sätze grammatisch richtig sind. Es ist viel, aber vielleicht findet jemand einwenig zeit um mir zu helfen.
Viele Dank.

LG Ogi

Aufgabe 2

Dear mother,
I’m still here in New York and I want to tell you about a happening. Du solltest "an event" verwendet. "A happening" ist eigentlich richtig, aber es klingt sehr komisch.
At six o’ clock yesterday I was eating my supper. Suddenly a young girl came in and smiled at me. It was Jenny Fischer. I was very surprised.
She looks very nice. Her blond hair is very long and she is tall and slender.
Jenny lives and works in New York. She is a model. She told me about her family.
When her father died in 2001 her mother took her and her sister Lea to New York.
From 2001 to 2005 she attended a Highschool and now she is at the NYU and has a model job to earn a little extra pocket money. "high school" ist zwei Wörter
Jenny told me that she was not working now and I invited her to stay with me for a week.
We are going to visit her family on Wednesday. Tomorrow afternoon we want to play tennis.
Jenny has two tickets for the Broadway Theatre for next Monday. I’m so happy to meet her.
I think we will enjoy our time together.
I’m going to come home next month.
Give my love to father and grandma.

Best wishes,
Your daughter Olga

[Arminius]

Aufgabe 4:

a). I always get up at 5 o’clock.
My daughter is sometimes allowed to go to school in my new car.
I have never seen such a beautiful face.
I often visit my best friend in the hospital.

b). When the robber saw the policeman he ran quickly into the garden.
c). Yesterday I drove my son to London.
d). He is two hours late because he was busy experimenting with his computer. "busy" nimmt keine "ly"
e). One afternoon I saw my drunken teacher walking very slowly down the road. "drunken" wird als adjektiv verwendet.

Aufgabe 5:

Last Weekend we had an excursion to a zoo. We, as in my husband, two cousins, and myself.
The day began very nicely. The weather was wonderful and we all enjoyed our drive with my new car. The zoo is in Hannover and is 95 km away so we had to drive about two hours. We had better take some entertainment with us. Hier wird "had" als "should" verwendet, so "take" ist infinitiv.
When we were in Hannover we had a flat tire. My husband tried to stop the car but it was impossible, because there were too many cars.
He decided to drive to the next bus stop. The tire was changed by my husband there. Keine "ex"
We all were irritated very much but we were able to look forward to the zoo.
We reached the zoo one hour later and we planed to stay there for about four hours.
It was very nice there. The children liked it too and they were very pleased. They cannot stop talking about the trip. I was glad to hear it.
About four hours later we left the zoo and drove home. Du brauchst keine präposition.
During the drive we kept an eye on our tire.
We reached our house one and a half hours later. When we were eating dinner we remembered our trip. We all think that it was worth visiting the zoo.

[Ogi81]

vielen lieben Dank Arminius, ich hoffe ich bekomme ne gute Note.....