Gedicht (poem) über Schmerzen (pain) bitte korrigieren! THX!

[Diva09]

Hey Hey!
Hatten eine Hausaufgabe auf. Durften eine Aufgabe wählen. Habe mich für ein Gedicht entschieden.
Bin nicht so fit in der Grammatik
Daher bitte ich um korrektur!! Danke schonmal!
Lg Diva09


Pain
and then I rembembered again.
I don't know how it like happen.

I sat simply only there.
are again times quiet.

I would like gladly laugh.
a kind of joy and without consider.

But it's heavy to give people a smile.

I would like to live.
a kind of joy and without consider.

This kind of look from humans make me pain.
They don't know what I feel.

I would like to treat normal.
As normally as everything on this world.

One day I hope everything will become better.
As normally, as normally as it only goes.

[Keswick (Contributor)]

Pain
and then I rembembered again.
I don't know how it happened.

I simply sat there.
times again are quiet.

I would like to gladly laugh.
a kind of joy and without consider (??).

But it's hard to give people a smile.

I would like to live.
a kind of joy and without consider (wieder ?? - was willst sagen?).

This kind of look from humans gives me pain.
They don't know what I feel.

I would like to be treat normally.
As normally as everything on this world.

One day I hope everything will become better.
Normal, as normal as possible.

[Diva09]

a kind of joy and without consider

einmal:
wie gerne würde ich lachen ganz ohne bedenken

und:
wie gern würde ich wieder leben ohne bedenken

[Keswick (Contributor)]

In diesem Fall musst du das Wort "concern" verwenden.

[Diva09]

danke =)