Token??

[Arusa]

Hallo
ich würde gern wissen ob man "token" ( im Wörterbuch = Merk zeichen/mal)
in dem Satz benutzen könnte :

Pain is my/his/your token

=

Schmerz ist mein/sein/dein Merkmal

[Delfino]

a bit more context would be helpful...

You may want to use an online dictionary
which offers you some example sentences, e.g.
http://dict.tu-chemnitz.de/dings.cgi?query=merkmal


I wouldn't use token!

Here are a few hints to find out
what the word token is used for.

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Token
http://www.webopedia.com/TERM/T/token.html

[Arusa]

Oh I'm sorry
so at the moment i try to write a song ^^
and the whole sentence would be :

My dreams are broken
Pain is their token

[Delfino]

Oh, I'm sorry,
at the moment I'm trying to write a song ^^
and the whole sentence would be:

My dreams are broken
Pain is their token.

I think, that sounds ok, but I'm not a native speaker.
Btw. in art you can always give voice to your thoughts with artistic freedom...