Bitte um Korrektur

[dissonanz]

Hallo an alle!

Bin nun neu dabei und möchte Euch gleich um Hilfe bitte.
Ich möchte eine Webseite veröffentlichen und würde gerne wissen, ob der folgende Text Fehler aufweist:

Staya - it‘s a solo-project of a musican, who was born in russia and actually lives in Germany.

The main subject of the music and the lyrics is anthipaty to the current behavior of human and their doings.

Everything is recordet absolutely independent, without any force of other people.
Some of the songs can be downloaded on this site.

If interest is aroused, it is possible to get a full length recording of the album Misanthropy.
Please contact the the E-Mail on this site.

Ich würde mich sehr freuen, wenn mir jemand helfen könnte und bedanke mich sehr herzlich im Voraus!

[Kliapatra]

Staya: it‘s a solo-project by a musician who was born in Russia and lives in Germany.

The main subject of the music and the lyrics is antipathy for the current behavior of human beings and their doings.

Everything is recorded completely independently, without the help of other people.
Some of the songs can be downloaded on this site.

If interest is aroused, it is possible to get a full length recording of the album Misanthropy.
Please contact the the e-mail on this site.

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"Completely" just sounds better than "absolutely" to me. Ich kann nicht sagen, warum das ist.

[dissonanz]

Hallo Kliapatra!

Vielen herzlichen Dank für Deine schnelle Hilfe!
Werde die Änderungen natürlich sofort vornehmen!

Hört sich der Text ansonsten "englisch" an?

[Kliapatra]

Jawohl!