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[Froggy_Frog]

Also ich Englisch ist unsere Aufgabe einen kleinen Text für einen Flyer zu schreiben. Dieser Text handelt von dem Gau in Tschernobyl. Es soll speziell eine Art Warnung sein und Schritte beinhalten die man einhalten sollte um sich so gut wie möglich vor einem radiaoktiven Regen und Wind zu schützen. Also ich weis meine Grammatik ist echt grottig deswegen wäre es gut wenn jemand mal drüberschauen könnte und mir meine Fehler sagt, vielleicht auch noch den ein oder anderen Tipp gibt wie es besser klingt. Ach ja und es wäre auch gut wenn das noch relativ zeitig geschehen würde denn wir müssen das schon morgen abgeben. Also schon mal danke im voraus.


Yesterday the 26.April a reactor accident happens in the power plant of Chernobyl in the USSR. A lot of nuclear fallout had been released, 100 times more than by the atomic bomb of Hiroshima. Now winds from that area drift over Europe. Our City is in the area of a dangerous downwind. In the next day’s radioactive rainfall will drop. Abide the following instructions to keep the danger for you as less as possible. At first the really most important, doesn’t matter what happen, never go outside at the time it rains. Also in main don’t go outside next time. If you have to go outside, only if you really have to, go in time where it doesn’t rain, protect your body with clothes and go by car not by foot. When you come back home take a shower and change your clothes. Furthermore don’t buy or eat fresh food. Prefer food you’d buy before the accident or tin food. Keep the doors and Windows of your house shut. At last hear radio and watch TV to get all new and maybe important information’s.


p.s. falls euch noch irgendwelche Maßnahmen einfallen könnt ihr die auch noch gerne sagen denn mir fallen keine mehr ein.^^

[Keswick (Contributor)]

Wieso postet ihr sowas denn nicht frueher? Wie sollen wir denn da noch rechtzeitig helfen?

Yesterday, the April 26 a reactor accident happened in the power plant of Chernobyl in the USSR. A lot of nuclear fallout has been released, 100 times more than by the atomic bomb of Hiroshima. Now winds from that area are drifting over Europe. Our city is in the area of a dangerous downwind. In the next couple of days radioactive rain will fall. Abide the following instructions to keep the danger for you as little as possible. First of all the most important advice, no matter what happens, is to never go outside while it is raining. Also in main don’t go outside next time. Sorry, ich weiss nicht, was du meinst. If you have to go outside, do it only if you really have to, go while it doesn’t rain, protect your body with clothes and go by car not by foot. When you come back home take a shower and change your clothes. Furthermore don’t buy or eat fresh food. Prefer food you have bought before the accident or canned food. Keep the doors and windows of your house shut. Finally listen to the radio and watch TV to get all new and maybe important information’s.