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[HeadUp]

Hallo zusammen,
ich wäre euch sehr dankbar, wenn mir jemand die folgenden Sätze korrigieren könnte:
Bin mir nicht sicher ob die Grammatik stimmt.

At the Niagara Falls is a ship, it called Made of the Mist, with this ship you can drive into the Niagara Falls so that you can see the Canadian and the American side of the cascades. On the next day we drove with the car down the Niagara River, there is the Cable Car, it looks like a gondola, this Cabel Car drives over a hard current and trough this current.

In America , federal state New York, we went to a rest stop to eat an real american breakfast, after it we went once again home. At the first day of the second week we drove to Toronto for two days. We behold the city and then we went to the CN Tower.

Vielen Dank !!

[Keswick (Contributor)]

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There is a ship at the Niagara Falls is a ship, which is called Made of the Mist. With this ship you can go into the Niagara Falls so that you can see the Canadian and the American side of the cascades. On The next day we drove with the car down the Niagara River by car . There is the Cable Car, it which looks like a gondola. This Cable Car drives over a hard current and trough this current. Ich weiss nicht genau, was du damit sagen willst.

In America , in the Federal State New York, we stopped to eat an real American breakfast. After that we went once again home. On the first day of the second week we went to Toronto for two days. We took a look around the city and then we went to the CN Tower.

Hallo Headup,

du solltest deine Saetze etwas kuerzer gestalten, damit deine Ausfuehrungen nicht wie eine Aufzaehlung klingt. Wenn du laengere Saetze schreiben willst, dann muessen die Nebensaetze gut eingefuehrt werden.

Ich hoffe du hattest Spass auf deiner Reise!