need correction :)

[Natronin]

Hi vielleicht kann auch jemand meinen Text verbessern Bin nämlich auch so ne Niete in Englisch.
Es ist eine Zusammenfassung.

The text is about a woman decides to visit her old school. She is surprised that the school is completly different. For example, all her teachers were dressed in black gowns and high collars, now they are dressed normally. They are friendly and welcomes her, her teachers were grimly and very disciplined. The biggest surprise is, when she looks at the classrooms. The children seem almosed free to do as they like. In her school-time, she was afraid to whisper to her neighbours. All has changed in her old school.

thanks and bye

[LillyIRL]

The text is about a woman who decides to visit her old school. She is surprised that the school is completely different. For example all her teachers were dressed in black gowns and high collars, now they are dressed normally. They are friendly and welcomes her, her teachers were grimly and very disciplined. The biggest surprise is better: the behaviour of the pupils. The children seem almost free to do what they like to do. In her school-time she was afraid to whisper to her neighbours. Everything has changed in her old school.

In welcher Klasse bist du? Die Satzkontruktionen sind ziemlich einfach, so wie der Text im Allgemeinen. Aber es kann ja sein, dass du noch nicht so viel gelernt hast.

Lg
Lilly

[Natronin]

vielen dank!!
bin in der 11. doch leider eine rießen Niete!Habe mich aber auch nie wirklich mit Englisch befasst Nochmals vielen Dank!!!
Wegen der Satzstellung, je einfacher die ist, umso weniger Fehler kann man einbauen

Liebe Grüße

[Delfino]

The text describes the experiences of an elderly woman who decides to visit her old school. She is very surprised that the school has changed completely. For example all her teachers were dressed in black gowns and high collars, now they are dressed normally. They are friendly and everyone welcomes her. She remembers that her teachers were often grimly and very disciplined. The behaviour of the pupils is the biggest positive surprise for her. The children seem almost free to do what they like to do. During her school days she was afraid to even whisper to her neighbours. Everything has changed in this school.

Vielen Dank!!
Ich bin in der 11. Klasse. Doch leider eine Riesenniete in Englisch!
Aber ich habe mich aber auch noch nie wirklich mit Englisch befasst.
Nochmals vielen Dank!!!

Wegen meiner Satzstellung, je einfacher sie ist, umso weniger Fehler kann ich einbauen...