hey!
wir haben heute die hausaufgabe bekommen über die Dinge zu schreiben die uns glücklich machen. abgabetermin ist erst in einer woche. ich würde mich furchtbar freuen wenn jemand drüberlesen könnte und mir den text zu korrigieren.. danke schonmal !!
What does happiness mean for me?
I think the feeling of happiness is hard to explain. Very often I’m happy but I don’t realize it. I’m just feeling good at such a moment.
I get happier when I seize the day than when I just sit at home doing nothing. The feeling of happiness doesn’t come to you. You have to let it out. There is no special plan that makes me happy.
What makes me feeling good doesn’t automatically bring happiness to another person. You have to discover which things make you happy.
For me there are lots of things which make me feeling good. I love o go out, to do sports, to go shopping, to visit friends and lots of other small things. Also a delicious meal for example can make me happy. When I’m with my friends we often laugh until tears are running down our faces. Sometimes we just relax and I’m feeling happy too. I’m not a person who can’t be happy alone. Being successful brings happiness to me too but I don’t think that the (einzige) way to get happy is to have (Berge) of money. Money doesn’t make you happy but it makes life easier. You don’t have to worry about lots of things.
I don’t really think that there is a single word which exactly means happiness for me. Words which I (verbinden/assoziieren) with this special feeling are friends, family, freedom, youth, love and also money.
What does happiness mean for me? =)
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Kasu
Re: What does happiness mean for me? =)
Hallo ,ich bin zwar mit Sicherheit die falsche Person,um eventuelle Fehler zu finden. Eins kann ich dir aber sagen.Zumindest habe ich deinen Text bestens verstanden.Bin dabei mein "Englisch" wieder zu finden ( aufzufrischen).airam11 hat geschrieben: I think the feeling of happiness is hard to explain. Very often I’m happy but I don’t realize it. I’m just feeling good at such a moment.
I get happier when I seize the day than when I just sit at home doing nothing. The feeling of happiness doesn’t come to you. You have to let it out. There is no special plan that makes me happy.
What makes me feeling good doesn’t automatically bring happiness to another person. You have to discover which things make you happy.
For me there are lots of things which make me feeling good. I love to go out, to do sports, to go shopping, to visit friends and lots of other small things. Also a delicious meal for example can make me happy. When I’m with my friends we often laugh until tears are running down our faces. Sometimes we just relax and I’m feeling happy too. I’m not a person who can’t be happy alone. Being successful brings happiness to me too but I don’t think that the only way to get happy is to have (Berge) of money. Money doesn’t make you happy but it makes life easier. You don’t have to worry about lots of things.
I don’t really think that there is a single word which exactly means happiness for me. Words which I connect / assoziate with this special feeling are friends, family, freedom, youth, love and also money.
(Berge) of money?? -leider keine Ahnung.Schreib doch einfach a lot of money.
Gruß Kasu
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Delfino
What does happiness mean to you?
I think the feeling of happiness is really hard to explain. I don't always realize that I'm happy. I’m just feeling very good. There is nothing special that I'm aiming for to be happy. But I noticed that I'm happier when I seize the day compared to sitting at home doing nothing. In my oppinion the pursue of your happiness is important. This is one of the things you have to discover on your own. And when you know what you enjoy most you can strive for it.
There are a lot of things which make me feeling good. For instance I love to go out, to work out / to get some exercise, to go shopping, to visit my friends and other small things. A delicious meal for example can make me happy too. When I’m with my friends we often laugh and laugh until tears are streaming down our cheeks. Sometimes we just relax and then I feel happy too. I can also be happy on my own. I always try to remember that not everything, which makes me feel very good, automatically brings happiness to another person too.
Although I'd like to be successful I don’t think that being rich is the only way to be happy. Having a lot of money doesn’t make you happy, but it definitely makes some areas of your life easier to manage. Just imagine what it would be like when you don’t have to worry about your monetary situation and other related issues anymore.
In the end I don’t think that there is a single word which describes exactly what happiness means to me. I associate so many words with this special feeling - e.g. my family and friends, freedom, youth, love and also having money.
I changed some of your sentences to make it sound better,
but I'm not perfect either. I hope this text helps you...
I think the feeling of happiness is really hard to explain. I don't always realize that I'm happy. I’m just feeling very good. There is nothing special that I'm aiming for to be happy. But I noticed that I'm happier when I seize the day compared to sitting at home doing nothing. In my oppinion the pursue of your happiness is important. This is one of the things you have to discover on your own. And when you know what you enjoy most you can strive for it.
There are a lot of things which make me feeling good. For instance I love to go out, to work out / to get some exercise, to go shopping, to visit my friends and other small things. A delicious meal for example can make me happy too. When I’m with my friends we often laugh and laugh until tears are streaming down our cheeks. Sometimes we just relax and then I feel happy too. I can also be happy on my own. I always try to remember that not everything, which makes me feel very good, automatically brings happiness to another person too.
Although I'd like to be successful I don’t think that being rich is the only way to be happy. Having a lot of money doesn’t make you happy, but it definitely makes some areas of your life easier to manage. Just imagine what it would be like when you don’t have to worry about your monetary situation and other related issues anymore.
In the end I don’t think that there is a single word which describes exactly what happiness means to me. I associate so many words with this special feeling - e.g. my family and friends, freedom, youth, love and also having money.
I changed some of your sentences to make it sound better,
but I'm not perfect either. I hope this text helps you...