mein Gedicht

[sammuq]

kann jemandem mir helfen? ich will nur wissen ob mein gedicht stimmt...
"Devote yourself to an ideal, but don´t forget where do you came from. You had to journey inwards... to what you really fear... now you know. Now, when you know, you hesitate. The more you learn, the less you know. So you imagine, you can never be good enough. But that´s a lie. If you have wings, the sun wont melt them tonight .“
danke!

[deinschatz]

"Devote yourself to an ideal, but don´t forget where you come from. You had to journey inwards... to what you really fear... now you know. Now, when you know, you hesitate. The more you learn, the less you know. So you imagine, you can never be good enough. But that´s a lie. If you have wings, the sun wont melt them tonight .“