ich hatte als Hausaufgabe ein Gedicht auf Englisch zu schreiben, das sich reimt und den if- clause typ 3 enthält.
Es wäre ganz toll, wenn mir jemand das POEM korrigieren könnte?!
Poem
I hadn´t been ill on Monday,
if I wouldn´t went out on Monday.
( But I visited a concert)
If I had waited longer,
I would have met Sarah Connor.
( Then I went home to hear her CD)
I could have listened to her CD,
if I hadn´t lost my key.
(Later, a friend came. He wanted to learn with me but I said I hadn´t time)
If I had told you more about the CDU,
you would have knew a few,
when the teacher had asked you.
( I thought about my schooltime...)
If I hadn´t gone to school,
I wouldn´t have learned any rule
and now I wouldn´t be so cool.
Bitte helft mir!
und korrigiert mir die Grammatik! Gruß I
