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Frineds25

Essay about communication!!!

Beitrag von Frineds25 »

Hey!! Ich brauch unbedingt eure Hilfe!!!Ich muss diesen Aufsatz schreiben über Kommunikation und ich weiß nicht , ob alles richrig, vor allem hinsichtlich der Grammatik :( . Wär total nett wenn ihr, dass mal kontrolliren würdet.


In my Opinion I like to communicate by Telephone and face to face, because three points convinced my point of view. First of all I would like to point out that a conversation is more interesting if I hear or see my communication partner. Furthermore, I get faster answer like a voice mail or an e-mail. Moreover, the communication by telephone or face to face is more personal, because I can show my feelings better than in an e-mail. Therefore, my communication partner reacts in a different and better way as in an e-mail, too. My partner can give me advises and possibilities to solve my problems. Maybe in an e-mail I get advises from my partner, as well, but face to face or by telephone I hear his or her voice and feel his or her emotions and my emotions. A other point is that the communication by face to face is more physical, therefore we can feel the near from a family member, a good friend of marriage partner. Furthermore, talk to a person is more efficient, because you can better see his or her reaction and you can react better to this.
In my point of view an e-mail or a voice mail are very modern, but if I have a big Problem, it will be better to talk face to face or call a good friend. Therefore, I know how my communication partner would solve the problem and I get a faster solution, due to I have to wait to get my answer by an e-mail.


MfG

Delfino

Beitrag von Delfino »

Hey!!
Ich brauche unbedingt eure Hilfe!!!
Ich muss einen Aufsatz über Kommunikation schreiben
und ich weiß nicht, ob alles richtig ist,
vor allem hinsichtlich der Grammatik. :(
Es wäre total nett wenn ihr ihn einmal kontrollieren würdet.

In my opinion I prefer to communicate via telephone and face to face, because of the following three reasons which convinced me (a long time ago).
First of all I would like to point out that a conversation is more interesting, if I hear or see my communication partner. Furthermore, I get answers faster compared to leaving a voice mail or sending an e-mail. Moreover, the communication by telephone or face to face is more personal, because I can express my feelings better than in an e-mail. Therefore, my communication partner reacts in a different and better way as in an e-mail, too. My partner can give me advises and help me to find possibilities to solve my problems. Maybe in an e-mail I get advises from my partner, as well, but I prefer talking face to face or via telephone because I can hear his or her voice and feel his or her emotions more easily and he or she can react to my emotions too. Another point is that face to face communication is really physical, therefore I can feel less alone with my problem when I am with a family member, a good friend or my spouse. Furthermore, talking to a person is more efficient, because you can see his or her reaction and you can react better upon it.
In my opinion an e-mail or a voice mail are very modern, but if I have a big problem, it's better to talk face to face or call a good friend. Therefore, I know my communication partner would more easily solve the problem and I get a faster reply too, due to the fact that I don't have to wait to get my answer, what I have to (do) when I send an e-mail.

Frineds25

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Dankeschön!!!