Poem: Just eleven words

[Hildegard]

Morning
In May
Bees are humming
Life is a pleasure
Happiness


Have a nice day,

Hildegard

[hunter-x]

Nice Poem

[Hildegard]

Thank you hunter-x,
the poem has a very easy format.

It starts with one word in line one, there are two words in line two and so and it ends with a one-word line. All in all the poem consists of eleven words.

You could do one if you want or anybody else here. It is very easy.

Hildegard

[Nevermore]

We had to write one of that kind in school a few years ago... can't remember mine, though

[Hildegard]

How about writing a new one Nevermore, you can do it.

Hildegard

[Hildegard]

Football
Looking Foward
What a bore!
Kick it like Ballack
Great!

Hildegard

[friendly2004]

love
feeling lonesome
goodbye my love
please come back here
hope

[Hildegard]

A beautiful poem, I hope the person it is devoted to can read it.


Hildegard

[friendly2004]

thank you hildegard!

[ot]
no, i don't think she reads it.
she left me and i guess it's final. it's been almost half a year now..[/ot]

[Hildegard]

That sounds a bit sad but


Better to have loved and lost than never to have loved at all

This sentence is true, isn't it?

It goes back to a poem by Alfred Lord Tennyson's

I hold it true, whate'er befall;
I feel it, when I sorrow most;
'Tis better to have loved and lost
Than never to have loved at all.


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Some things never change I think.


Hildegard

[Nora]

thank you for this poem



and i totally agree with you
Some things never change!