Brief auf Englisch verfassen

[inna]

hallooo meine lieben;))
ich habe demnächst prüfungen und muss auf englisch einen brief verfassen können wollte euch ein von mir geschriebenen Brief auf englisch zeigen und wollte eure Meinung dazu hören. FREU MICH AUF VERBESSERUNGSVORSCHLÄGE also das ist ein brief an einen Freund

Dear Thomas,

hello, i hope that you are fine! I feel me good. I wish to thank you for your last letter. What have you been up to the last couple of days. I was with my family in the holiday in Russia it was great but the most people are unfriendly to us, because we come from Germany

ohh Thomas, i wish you were here and we could spend the holidays together. Why don`t you come down to pforzheim and visit our familiy? It would give us great pleasure.

also when do i see you again;)) ??

please write soon and give my compliments to your familiy and friends.

Best wishes

your friend Inna

[Deccius]

Dear Thomas,

Hello, I hope that you are fine! I feel good. I wish to thank you for your last letter. What have you been up to the last couple of days? I was with my family during the holiday in Russia; it was great but most people are unfriendly to us, because we come from Germany

Oh Thomas, I wish you were here and we could spend the holidays together. Why don`t you come down to Pforzheim and visit our familiy? It would give us great pleasure.

Also when will I see you again?

Please write soon and give my regards to your family and friends.

Best wishes,

Your friend Inna

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