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[Storm]

Hallo,

morgen schreibe ich eine English Arbeit und brauche ganz dringend eure Hilfe. Habe einen kurzen Text geschrieben, wäre nett wenn mir den mal ganz schnell einer korregieren könnte, brauche den nämlich schnellst möglich um ihn auswendig zu lernen!

Danke im Voraus!

Hier der Text:

Nowadays extreme activities especially extreme sports get more and more popular. People who do extreme things are often bored from their life and search for a challenge to get the "kick". They want to do something extraordinary that is connected with adrenaline and high risk. It muste be a way of escaping the nine-to-five lifestyle that they lead. So many people do extreme sports like Bungee Jumping, Skydriving, Freeclimbing or Firewalking. It can be true that these people enjoy developing their physical or mental abilities but they are also proud to take part in extreme sports.
Extreme sports has become one of the most important issue in consequenz of death or injuries.

Verbesserungsvorschläge und Korrektur der Rechtschreibfehler sind erwünscht!

Danke nochmals!

Beste Grüße

Storm

[LivingInAmerika]

Nowadays extreme activities, especially extreme sports, getare becoming more and more popular. People who do extreme things are often bored fromwith their lives and are searching for a challenge to get the "kick"("to get their kicks" klingt besser). They want to do something extraordinary that is connected with adrenaline and high risk. It must be a way of escaping the nine-to-five lifestyle that they lead. So, many people do extreme sports like Bungee Jumping, Skydriving, Freeclimbing, or Firewalking. It canmight be true that these people enjoy developing their physical or mental abilities, but they are also proud to take part in extreme sports.
Extreme sports has become one of the most important issues in consequenzdue to the risk of death or injuries.

Hope that helps a bit!