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Hi brauche wirklich dringend eure Hilfe. Auf die letzte Arbeit schrieb ich eine 5 und deswegen habe ich mich bereits früher mit der Schularbeit beschäftigt. Also ich bräuchte dringend jemand der versucht wirklcih alle Fehler zu finden bzw mir Tips zu geben. Im Vordergrund steht die Korrektur von den Aufsätzen. Besuche die 6te Klasse eines Gymnasiums. Also bitte helft mir.
Es handelt um das Buch The Chamber von John Grisham. Vom Inhalt eig. nicht beachten, es geht mir nur um die Fehler.


1)
The Kramer building was bombed because it was a Jewish office which was helping to rebuild black churches and they protested against the white only facilities. Jeremiah Dogan gave Sam introductions and Rollie Wedge was his accessory. They were member of the KKK and so they were racists. Sam wasn’t able to configure the bomb and so Rollie assumed this part of the bombing. They broke in the Kramer office and they placed the bomb in the main hallway. But the bomb exploded too late and Sam was near the office while it happened, because he liked to look at his doings. He was also damaged and he started to bleed. He was shocked and drove with his Pontiac away but he was stopped by the police. The laboratory found broken fragments of the Kramer window in Sams face and the police found a 15minutes fuse in his car. So he was caught. Sam didn’t mentioned Rollie Wedge but the Pontiac was traced to Dogan. There were three trials.
At the first trial their lawyer was Brazelton and the jury were only white people and the place where the trial was, was sympatic to the KKK. The trial was abandoned. On the secont there was a woman with two twins which voted against Sam but the trial was undecided. The third trial was late in the 80s. Many thinks changed. There were the civil rights and blacks were allowed to vote and were allowed to go to school. McAllister wanted to bring Sam and the other involved people to justice and so he spoke a really sad address and there were also black peoples in the jury. Jeremiah had to evidence against Sam if he didn’t he would be sent to prison. So Sam was found guilty.

2)
The Lincolns were working a long time for Sam and his family. Sams son Eddie and Joes son Quince were best friends. Already early Eddie asked why Quince had to drive in a different bus or why they had have so many children or why they were living in a bad house and Sam answered that they had to keep the races separate. One day Eddie accused Quince of stealing his plaything and Sam hear that and he bashed Quince. Later his father came and they started to fight but Sam took a shotgun and killed him. Eddie and Lee were watching it and were shocked. Later Eddie found his soldier under his bed. Eddie started to hate the KKK and his father since that incident. Many years later Eddie committed suicide because his father was sent to death penalty and he was ashamed about him.
But in the end Sam really regretted the death of Joe Lincoln and he said that he was a good guy and he wrote an apologize to his family.







3)
Sam wasn’t an evil person. He was only a victim of bad education because he had learn only thinks like racism. Sam changed his opinion because he was under death row and because of Adam. He regretted what he have done and wrote to the victims families apologizes. Also Sam disclaimed the KKK and he started to hate them because everything was their fault. He didn’t saw himself as a member anymore. Also he disallow that Joe Lincoln was a good guy and he knew that he has done a big mistake. He searched forgiveness from god and confessed to the chaplain. Sam changed everything and he didn’t want to die in the red clothes. Also he wanted to see the sunrise a last time. He told the chaplain that he didn’t want kill at the Kramer bombing anyone. Sam was ready to die for Adam and Lee because he was afraid that Rollie would kill them because his old lawyer and Dogan were also killed mystery including their families.

4)Sams didn’t believe anymore that they would accept Adams appeals. The last days were silent and he was allowed to see a last time the sunrise. He finished with his old life and wrote to the families of the victims an apologize. Also he wrote a letter to a Jewish church . He confessed to a chaplain and said to Adam that he should forget to save him because it was too late. On the last days many organization were standing in front of the prison like KKK and death penalty protesters. He wrote a letter to the KKK in which stand that they hate them and that he wasn’t a member anymore.
On the last day also his brother Donnie visited him and he was very happy about his visit. Sam read the news and stared at the television in the last hour. He ate his last ice cream and drunk coffee and said to Adam that he isn’t angry about that Lee isn’t present.


5)
McAllister was the attorney in the third trial. As a child he saw the Kramer bombing and was standing in front of the ruins. He swore that he would punish the involved peoples. Dogan evidenced again Sam because of McAllister. After Sam was found guilty McAllister reached the position as governor. Only he was able to pardon Sam. He was a very persistent person and he denied the claim of a clemency hearing without public attention because he wanted to know the name of the other involved peoples but Sam didn’t betray his accessory because he was afraid that Rollie would kill Lee or Adam. McAllisters goal was to remove this painful chapter with Sams death.
Sam was ready to die for them.
6)
Adam was really dedicated to save his grandfathers life. Goodman helped him so well as possible. First he attacked the gas chamber as a cruel and inhuman way to die. They said that It would be related to because his case was in 1984. Adam ignored that because he wanted only to become time. They denied his appeal. They agreed that this is a cruel and inhuman way to die and why Sam should reserve something harmless. Second he tried to prove Sams mentally unbalance and so he paid a psychiatrist to forger his opinion. He told them that Sam didn’t know when his wife died and that he forgot the names of peoples but the other witnesses said that he was completely in a normal condition and so his appeal was denied again. Then he tried to attack Sams latest lawyer because of his ineffectiveness but they also denied his appeal. His last try was to speak to the governor but he claimed that Sam had to betray the other involved peoples but Sam denied. Adam wanted only a clemency hearing without public attention because Sam could say the true about Rollie and what happened.

So Sam died in the gas chamber . . .


7)
Nobody has the right to kill someone. The life is the onliest thing which is unpayable. You were the reason why three people have died. The Kramer twins died painfully at the bombing. Their father lost his legs and later he committed suicide. Everything because of you! You are a member of the KKK and you hadn’t charity with the Jews you have damaged and so why I should have charit with you? You have to die as a sign that racism is death. Probably you have killed more peope and we don’t know about that. The Kramers were good people and so many people are interest in your death. I cant cognition that you have regret about that what happened and so you cant expect that you haven’t to die. Why should you get the death injection which doesn’t include any pain? Why you should get the right to stand allowance? Yes the chamber is a cruel and inhuman method to kill people but you were also cruel and inhuman to other people. Also the prison guard said that you hadn’t change your opinion. Casually also the time have changed. The influence of KKK is near zero and blacks and Jews are integrating in the social life and generally the racial discrimination is going down. At least only god can forgive you.

8) Sam committed a lot of crimes. The latest was the Kramer bombing. Two young children had been killed and their father lost his legs. It wasn’t planed that people had to die. He was a poor guy because of a poor education. He bombed the building because they were fight for the rights of the blacks and they helped them to rebuild their churches. Sam was involved in three lynches. As a kid he saw that white people were lynching a black guy. With 15 or 16 he lynched a black guy because a white girl affirmed that this guy had rapped her and she was pregnant because of him. The third was on Cletus but Sam wasn’t able to talk about it. Also he killed his friend Joe Lincoln because he thought his son had stole something. Also he bombed a lot of Jewish buildings and he killed the murder of their father with his brother.







Danke für eure Hilfe im Vorhinein

[Paddy92]

1)

At the first trial their lawyer was Brazelton and the jury were only white people and the place where the trial was, was sympatic the KKK. The trial was abandoned. On the second there was a woman with two twins which voted against Sam but the trial was undecided. The third trial was late in the 80s. Many thinks changed. There were the civil rights and blacks were allowed to vote and were allowed to go to school.

7)
Nobody has the right to kill someone. The life is the onliest thing which isn't payable . You
unpayable gibt es nicht
were the reason why three people have died. The Kramer twins died painfully at the bombing. Their father lost his legs and later he committed suicide. Everything because of you! You are a member of the KKK and you hadn’t charity with the Jews you have damaged and so why I should have charite with you? You have to die as a sign that racism is death. Probably you have killed more people and we don’t know about that. The Kramers were good people and so many people are interest in your death.

das ist so grob das was ich gefunden hab garantiere aber nicht das alles richtig ist