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[charleen]

Hallo, ich habe aus der Sicht einer in der Story involvierten Person einen Bericht über die geschichte geschrieben und so gut wie es geht Emotionen mit einzubauen. ich würde mich sehr über Kontrollesen freuen, da ich hierfür eine Note bekommen werde.

Suddenly was Mr. Protess, my professor, on the phone. It was 6 o`clock a.m. and I wa sreally suprised. Ordinarily he doesn´t phone us students. Something special must been happened.
He said i should come straight to him, we have to speak about a big affair.
In this moment i felt so exicited and sallied directl to the faculty of journalism. It was my study path and I would do everything to become a famous journalist- Therefore it doesn´t matter what Protess demands for me right now- iw ill do it!
When I come into the room 4 of my fellow sudents were already there. Mr. protess started to explain. Hey guys i think you are the best students and i nedd only the bests for this difficult case. Woe, now i was really impressed but nervous, too. That´s why i asked him what´s necessity happened. Thereon he told that a black man, named Anthony Porter was possibl wrongly in imprisonment. In this moment I became nosier. That would be not the first case of injustice in America. m professor went on talking: if we want to help him, we have to be very fast. otherwise he will be killed in a few days.
On the spot we started to inform us more about this case..
On august 15, 1982 Jerry Hillard and his girlfriend Marylin green, both almost 20 years old, had been shot and at that wa killed in Washington Park. Hundrets of black people celebrated there their celebration of black culture. At that time the 27 years old men Anthony Porter was there, too an dthe police stopped him, because he was considered as on of the "usual suspects". But the police couldn´t proof him anything, he has´nt even a gun. We were known short time later that william taylor he had seen the shooting and he had identified Porter as the killer an dthen Alsormy and Inez Simon confirmed it. For me was this situation ver starnge. Imean porter a poor men with an iq of 51 should be the murderer? For me the police only want to have a murderer, immaterial who!
They want to have success- that´s everything. that´s why porter was arrested and send to death row without dectivy anymore. But it´s not okay for me, so i wnated to fight for him. he spent 16 years in his cell only waiting for examination. anthing makes me feel sure, that he is´n the murderer.

Ich weiß, dass der Text ziemlich lang ist, aber es ist sehr wichtig für mich und mein Englisch ist nicht gerade das Beste gerade bezogen auf Stle und Grammatik.
Würde mich she rüber eure Hilfe freuen.
Vilen Dank, Charleen

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Suddenly it was Mr. Protess, my professor, on the phone. It was 6 o`clock a.m. and I wa sreally was really surprised. Ordinarily he doesn´t phone us students. Something special must been have happened.
He said i I should come straight to him, we have to speak about a big affair.
In this moment i I felt so exicited and sallied directly to the faculty of journalism. It was my study path major and I would do everything to become a famous journalist- Therefore it doesn´t matter what Protess demands for of me right now- iw ill I will do it!
When I come came into the room 4 of my fellow sudents were already there. Mr. Protess started to explain. Hey guys i I think you are the best students and i I nedd need only the bests for this difficult case. Woe Whoa, now i I was really impressed, but nervous, too. That´s why i I asked him what´s necessity happened. Thereon Then he told us that a black man, named Anthony Porter was possibly wrongly in imprisonment imprisoned. In At this moment I became nosier more interested. That would be not the first case of injustice in America. m My professor went on talking: if we want to help him, we have to be very fast, otherwise he will be killed in a few days.
On the spot we started to inform us ourselves more about this case..
On August 15, 1982, Jerry Hillard and his girlfriend Marylin Green, both almost 20 years old, had been shot and at that wakilled in Washington Park. Hundreds of black people celebrated there their celebration of black culture there. At that time the 27 years old man Anthony Porter was there, too, an dtheand the police stopped him, because he was considered as on one of the "usual suspects". But the police couldn´t proof him prove anything, he has´nt didn't even have a gun. We were known knew a short time later that William Taylor he had seen the shooting and he had identified Porter as the killer an dthen and then Alsormy and Inez Simon confirmed it. For me was this situation was very starnge strange. I mean, Porter, a poor man with an iq IQ of 51 should be the murderer? For me it seemed the police only wanted to have a murderer, it is immaterial who!
They want to have success- that´s everything. That´s why porter was arrested and sent to death row without dectivy ? anymore. But it´s not okay for me, so i wnated wanted to fight for him. He spent 16 years in his cell only just waiting for examination a trial (?). anthing Everything makes me feel sure, that he is ´n not the murderer.