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track_yhalim

can you help me? please:)

Beitrag von track_yhalim »

bitte korrigieren:) das soll ein one-minute referat sein;)

thanks a lot



TOWER BRIDGE:


In the 1860s London had a problem, It was traffic. Crossing the River Thames was especially difficult. So, the City of London decided to build a new river crossing. The construction of the Tower Bridge began in 1886 and it was completed in 1894. But the architekt of the bridge never saw his work, because he died before it was complete. The bridge crosses the River Thames and it is the only moveable bridge of the 29 bridges on this river. It is also the most famous bridge in London and it is 244 meters wide and 65 meters tall. It takes its name from the Tower of London, which is next to the bridge. From the top of the towers you have a great view on the center of London.

seeyainabit

Beitrag von seeyainabit »

TOWER BRIDGE:

Suggestion: The Tower Bridge - London´s most famous Bridge is known all around the world. The construction began in 1886 to solve the problem of London´s traffic situation during the 1860s. The city of London decided to built a new bridge to easen the crossing of the River Thames which posed the biggest problem then. Unfortunately, the architect of the bridge died before the cosntruction was finsihed in 1894, so he could never see his work. However, within just eight years there was a bridge created that is 244 meters long and 65 meters high. Moreover, it is the only moveable bridge of the 28 others crossing the River Thames named after the Tower of London right next to it. Standing on the top of the top of the tower you have a great view over the center of London.


In the 1860s London had a problem, It was - traffic. Especially crossing the River Thames was especially difficult.

So, the City of London decided to build a new bridge river crossing.

The construction of the Tower Bridge began in 1886 and it was finished completed in 1894.

But Unfortunately, the architect of the bridge never saw his work, because he died before it was complete. (I´d give this information at the end as additional ones.)

(The Tower Bbridge crosses the River Thames and) ( repetition) it is the only moveable bridge of the 29 bridges on this river.

It is also the most famous bridge in London and ( I´d move this either to the beginning or the end. You could use it as an introduction, too.

It is 244 meters long wide and 65 meters high tall.

It got takes its name from the Tower of London, which is next to the bridge.

Standing From on the top of the towers you have a great view over on the center of London.

seeyainabit

Beitrag von seeyainabit »

Sorry, one top less in the last sentence. :lol:

MLS

Beitrag von MLS »

Seeyainabit,
wir korrigieren hier nur. Schreibe bitte keine komplett neuen Texte, damit ist den Mitgliedern nicht geholfen. In der Schule wird Eigenarbeit gefrat und in der Regel fallen fremde Texte auf. Und das nicht positiv...

seeyainabit

Beitrag von seeyainabit »

I am trully sorry! Just wanted to help and didn´t know that it is not allowed to do so just in a special volume! Sorry!

MLS

Beitrag von MLS »

seeyainabit hat geschrieben:I am trully sorry! Just wanted to help and didn´t know that it is not allowed to do so just in a special volume! Sorry!
No problem. Just remember it for future posts.