bitte kontrollieren

[sweety_N]

Hey Ihr!!
Könnt ihr mal schauen ob das richtig ist von der Sprache????

also Korrigieren bitte..wäre voll lieb...

Why read a lot of people in the S-Bahn a newspaper? Maybe they buy it, so they have a conversation. But what respect ,if they buy a newspaper? I think there are many facts. The point is the first impression. If yaou look at the front page, there must be interesting photopgraphs, items and headlines, so many people would biy this newspaper. When they read goof wordings, the reader will find it interesting and the items be good conveyed.


Danke/ thank you!!!!

[k1024]

Hey Ihr!!
Könnt ihr mal schauen ob das richtig ist von der Sprache????

also Korrigieren bitte..wäre voll lieb...

Why do a lot of people read a newspaper in the S-Bahn? Maybe they buy it, so they have a conversation. But what respect, if they buy a newspaper? I think there are many facts. The point is the first impression. If you look at the front page, there must be interesting pictures, items and headlines, so many people would buy this newspaper. When they read goof wordings, the reader will be interested in that and the items will be good conveyed.


Danke/ thank you!!!!

Mein erster Verbesseerungsvorschlag.
Vielleicht habe ich etwas übersehen...
Krischi

[sweety_N]

ok danke schon mal..ich muss noch nen paar wörter mehr schrieben und am besten die wörter tyspeface( Schriftart), bold(fett gedruckt) und emotion rein bringen... alles unter der überschrift "reading a newspaper..habt ihr noch vorschläge?