fbm1986 hat geschrieben:Frage:
Why would you like to participate on this programme? (Basketball Sport programme in the US)
Antwort:
I would like to participate on this Programme because i have/want so much love for sports, to work with children, to see a different country, to improve my english skills, to have new experiences for my ongoing life, to connect with different people from different countries,...
I really want to do this because to me it´s like opening a new Chapter in my Life.
I've been playing Basketball for 12 years now in a professional Team. I´m playing the Point Guard Position which means i have to distribute in many aspects of the Game. Playing the Point Guard Position means a lot of Pressure and a lot of Responsibility. Two years ago i was coaching a KIDS Basketball Team and won a Big Tournament in Austria. To cut a long Story Short -> i can deal with pressure and i´m aware of the responsibility that i will have.
A few Years ago Nike was doing a few Basketball Camps in Austria. They asked me if i would like to work with Kids and show them a few Basketball Skills. It was a lot of fun working with those kids. The Kids were age 5 to 16. I did not know much of the kids, because they were coming from all over the Country to participate at the Camp. The Camp lasted 1 week and there were about 40 kids and 3 coaches. I was working with 15-18 kids a day. The Camp and especially working with children was a great experience.
My number one hobby is photography. I´m always taking my camera with me when i´m outside. My favourite shots are snap-shots, natureshots , portraits, actionphotos,...
With making photos i can train my creativity. My camera and i are almost every day in the nature. It´s like the camera brings me together with the nature.
Da ich nicht so gut bin in Englisch wäre ich euch sehr dankbar, wenn ihr mir die Fehler auflisten könntet die ich gemacht habe...
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I would be pleased to receive a message from anyone...
danke im voraus !
lg Stefan
I would like to participate on this Programme because i have/want so much love for sports, to work with children, to see a different country, to improve my english skills, to have new experiences for my
on going life, to connect with different people
and countries,...
I really want to do this because to me it´s like opening a new Chapter in my
life.
I've been playing Basketball for 12 years now in a professional Team. I´m playing the Point Guard Position which means i have to distribute in many aspects of the Game. Playing the Point Guard Position means a lot of Pressure and a lot of Responsibility. Two years ago i was coaching a KIDS Basketball Team and won a Big Tournament in Austria. To cut a long Story Short
that is why i can deal with pressure and i´m aware of the responsibility that i will have.
A few Years ago Nike was doing a few Basketball Camps in Austria. They asked me if i would like to work with Kids and show them a few Basketball Skills. It was a lot of fun working with those kids. The Kids were
between 5 to 16
age old. I did not know much of the kids, because they were coming from all over the
country to participate at the Camp. The Camp lasted
one week and there were about 40 kids and
three coaches. I was working with 15-18 kids a day. The Camp and especially working with children was a great experience.
My
favorite hobby is photography. I´m always taking my camera with me when i´m outside. My favourite shots are snap-shots, natureshots , portraits, actionphotos,...
With making photos i can train my creativity. My camera and i are almost every day in the nature. It´s like the camera brings me together with the nature.
Personality I found your text good, but you must be careful that numbers under 13 were selected.
Ausnahme ist, wenn du etwas beschreibst wie: sie sind im alter zwischen 5 bis 16
da kannst du die 5 so hinschreiben, ansonsten solltest du schon darauf achten, dass alle Zahlen unter 13 ausgeschrieben werden.
mfg
honey-n