Bob Marley Referat Korrigur..

[TDK]

Guten Tag,

derzeit arbeite ich an ein Referat in Englisch welches sich über Bob Marley dreht.

Dieses 'Referat' wird zu einen schriftlich & mündlich benotet.
Das Schriftliche ist das hier vorhandene Skript (unten) und das Mündliche wird via Aufnahme aufgenommen und vor der Klasse abgespielt woraus sich eben die mündliche Note ergibt.

Ich bin hier um mein Skript korriegieren zu lassen, was echt super wäre.
Ich hoffe doch mal, dass sich jemand für mich diese Mühe machen würde, da ich dieses Skript schnellmöglichst fertig kriegen muss und ich denke, dass eine Überprüfung von Leute die darauf spezialisiert sind nicht schadet. Ich wäre denjenigen echt sehr dankbar.
Über eine Meinung wie das Script im groben aussieht wäre ich auch sehr dankbar.

Vom Blatt was:

Your script includes:

● his/her personal life
● his/her career
● anything else you find interesting
● reason(s) why you like him/her


Für die Aufnahme haben wir 3-5 Minuten.
Ich denke aber, dass ich 2-3 Min. überschreiten darf und finde die Länge vom Skript her sehr in Ordnung und was sein Leben+Karriere betrifft auch, da man nicht in paar Minuten sein ganzes Leben erzählen kann. Darüber könnte man - denke ich - etliche Bücher schreiben.

Das Script :

Many ‘modern’ people don’t know what reggae is actually.
I’ll tell you something about the reggae legend Bob Marley.
And this is the real question : Who was Bob Marley?
Bob Marley was one of the few reggae legends in the music history.

His real name is Robert Nesta Marley born on February, 6 , 1945 in Nine Miles Jamaica.
Bob’s mother “Cedella” was at that time 18 years old.
His father “Norval Sinclair Marley“ was a British marine office and his mother a local.
The wedding between Cedella and Norval was a scandal. The end was, his father had to leave the british marine.
A short time after Bob’s birth his father left the family. He had only little contact to him to support Bob financially. Sometimes he visited him but this visits was very rare.

At the age of 16 he dropped out of the school and focused on music.
Bob spent in this time very much time with Neville Livingstone alias „Bunny“ .
Bunny had the same interests as Bob Marley.
Bob and Bunny visited together the music-school of the Jamaica legend “Joe Higgs”.
Joe Higgs was a famous artist in Jamaica.
During this time the Jamaicans music became internationally famous.
In the music-school Bob and Bunny met their next friend ‘Peter Macintosh’

1965 created Bob with some friends the band ‘Wailing Wailers’. The band had 5 members.
After a unlucky start Cherry and Junior Braithwait left the band.
Bob, Bunny and Peter Macintosh were now the band.
After some successes started Neville Livingstone “Bunny” and Peter Macintosh her solo career.
Whose albums :
- Catch a fire (1972)
- African Herbsman (1973)
- Burnin’ (1973)
- Natty Dread (1975)

Bob changed the name from the band to “Bob Marley and the Wailers”
The gab became filled by Rita Marley, Judy Mowatts and Marcia Grittiths.
Members came and went.
Whose albums:
- Rastaman Vibration (1976)
- Exodus (1977)
- Kaya (1978)
- Survival (1979)
- Uprising (1980)
- Chances Are (1981)

The band became famous in America with the album „Rastaman Vibration“
They was honored 1976 by the „Rolling Stones“ for the title „Band of the year“
At the fifth of December 1976 gave Bob Marley a free concert in Kingston’s National Heros Park with the though for a peace message although 2 days before some guys broken in his house and shooting in Bobs arm and chest. Bob survived and made his concert.
In the future happened that Bob and the Wailers made many concerts in the world and gained more reggae popularity.
The concerts from Bob Marley and the Wailers were valid to the best at this time.

Bob Marley died at the young age of 36 by cancer.
His death-day is May, 11, 1981.
Bob Marley was buried on May, 21 and very much people attended his burial including the Jamaica president.
Bob rests in a mausoleum in Nine Miles, Jamaica.

And remember:
Bob Marley is dead but his deeds and his songs stay in memory.


Why did you chose this artist?
I chose Bob Marley because he’s in my eyes the best person for my presentation.
Bob gave really much people in the world hope and he have a really interesting life career.
His songs communicate embassies and that’s why I like his songs.
He is important for the total humanity with his embassies. This artist should get respect .

Falls ich die falsche Sektion erwischt habe, bitte ich darum, dass dieser Thread verschoben wird.

[xecole]

Many ‘modern’ people don’t know what reggae actually is.
I'm going to tell you something about the reggae legend Bob Marley.
And this is the real question : Who was Bob Marley?
Bob Marley was one of the few reggae legends in the music history.

His real name was Robert Nesta Marley and he was born on February 6 , 1945 in Nine Miles, Jamaica.
Bob’s mother “Cedella” was 18 years old at the time.
His father “Norval Sinclair Marley“ was a British marine office and his mother a local girl.
The wedding between Cedella and Norval was a scandal. The result was, his father had to leave the British Navy.
A short time after Bob’s birth, his father left the family. He had only a little contact with him to support Bob financially. Sometimes he visited him but these visits was very rare.

At the age of 16 he dropped out of the school and focused on music.
At this stage, Bob spent a lot of time with Neville Livingstone alias „Bunny“ .
Bunny had the same interests as Bob Marley.
Together, Bob and Bunny visited the music-school of the Jamaican legend “Joe Higgs”.
Joe Higgs was a famous Jamaican artist.
During this time, Jamaican music became internationally famous.
At music-school, Bob and Bunny met their next friend ‘Peter Macintosh’

In 1965, Bob created the band ‘Wailing Wailers’ with some friends . The band had 5 members.
After an unlucky start, Cherry and Junior Braithwaite left the band.
The band was now Bob, Bunny and Peter Macintosh.
After some successes (weiss nicht was du sagen willst, vielleicht hits=schläger,) Neville Livingstone “Bunny” and Peter Macintosh started her solo (Wer? Neville, Peter, beide?? )career.
Her / Their albums were :
- Catch a fire (1972)
- African Herbsman (1973)
- Burnin’ (1973)
- Natty Dread (1975)

Bob changed the name of the band to “Bob Marley and the Wailers”
The gap became filled by Rita Marley, Judy Mowatts and Marcia Grittiths.
Members came and went.
Their albums were:
- Rastaman Vibration (1976)
- Exodus (1977)
- Kaya (1978)
- Survival (1979)
- Uprising (1980)
- Chances Are (1981)

The band became famous in America with the album „Rastaman Vibration“
They were honored 1976 by „Rolling Stone“ (die Zeitschrift) for the title „Band of the year“
On the fifth of December 1976 Bob Marley gave a free concert in Kingston’s National Heros Park with a message of peace even though 2 days earlier some guys had broken into his house and shot him in the arm and chest. Bob survived and made his concert.
In the future happened that Bob and the Wailers went on to give gave many concerts in the world and gained more popularity.
The concerts of Bob Marley and the Wailers were valid to the best at this time (verstehe ich nicht, vielleicht were among the best of that time).

Bob Marley died young of cancer at the age of 36 .
The day of his death was May, 11, 1981.
Bob Marley was buried on May, 21 and very many people attended his funeral including the Jamaican president.
Bob rests in a mausoleum in Nine Miles, Jamaica.

And remember:
Bob Marley is dead but his deeds and his songs live on in memory.


Why did you choose this artist?
I chose Bob Marley because in my eyes he’s the best person for my presentation.
Bob gave a great many people in the world hope and he had a really interesting life career.
His songs communicate messages and that’s why I like his songs.
His messages are important for all of humanity .This artist deserves respect .

[TDK]

Thanks.