Ich muss morgen im Unterricht ein Vortrag über Martin Luther King halten und wollte Fragen ob ihr den Text mal korrigieren könntet, falss ihr Fehler entdeckt.
-Martin Luther King-
With the succes of the "Montgomery Bus Boycotts" in the year 1956, the influence of Martin Luther King on the Civil Rights Movement and his impact on the black population increased. In the following years he travelled in the USA and gave countless speaches. the enforcement of the Civil Rights Act in 1964 and the tribute to the Nobel price made Martin Luther King become the greatest leader of the non-violent protests for equal rights for blacks.
In 1960 the Student Nonviolent Coordinating Commitee (SNCC) was founded because they criticied Martin Luther King's function.
1964 Malcolm X brought the Organization of Afro American Unity (OAAU) into being. In his speech Malcolm X dissociated himself from Martin Luther King.
1966 the black Panther Party was founded. They put themself out for the "black nationalism" and the right defend themselves. Martin Luther King clash with Roy Wilkins (leader of the NAACP) despite the fact that Roy Wilkins went to some demonstrations of Martin Luther King. Nevertheless Martin Luther King remained for many until his death the undisputed leader of the non-violent resistance.
korrektur der übersetzung!!!
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Deccius
Es wäre schön, wenn Du den orginalen deutschen Text, den Du übersetzt, posten würdest. Kenntnisse davon kann hilfreich sein, als man eine Übersetzung liest. Trotzdem sind das meine Korrekturen und Vorschläge:
-Martin Luther King-
With the success of the "Montgomery Bus Boycotts" inthe year 1956, the influence of Martin Luther King on the Civil Rights Movement and his impact on the black population increased. In the following years he travelled in the USA and gave countless speeches. The enforcement of the Civil Rights Act of 1964 and the tribute to the Nobel prize made Martin Luther King become the greatest leader of the non-violent protests for equal rights for blacks. [You should revise this sentence, because it is too verbose.]
In 1960 the Student Nonviolent Coordinating Commitee (SNCC) was founded because they criticized Martin Luther King's function.
1964 Malcolm X brought the Organization of Afro American Unity (OAAU) into being. In his speech Malcolm X dissociated himself from Martin Luther King.
1966 the Black Panther Party was founded. Theyput themselves out for the supported "black nationalism" and the right to defend themselves. Martin Luther King clashed with Roy Wilkins (leader of the NAACP) despite the fact that Roy Wilkins went to some demonstrations of Martin Luther King. Nevertheless Martin Luther King remained for many until his death the undisputed leader of the non-violent resistance.
Man braucht nicht den ganzen Namen einer Person zu schreiben, nachdem ihn man einmal herausgeschrieben hat. Danach kann man einfach die Person beim Nachname rufen.
-Martin Luther King-
With the success of the "Montgomery Bus Boycotts" in
In 1960 the Student Nonviolent Coordinating Commitee (SNCC) was founded because they criticized Martin Luther King's function.
1964 Malcolm X brought the Organization of Afro American Unity (OAAU) into being. In his speech Malcolm X dissociated himself from Martin Luther King.
1966 the Black Panther Party was founded. They
Man braucht nicht den ganzen Namen einer Person zu schreiben, nachdem ihn man einmal herausgeschrieben hat. Danach kann man einfach die Person beim Nachname rufen.