Hallo,
wie der Titel schon verspricht, habe ich einen Cover Letter geschrieben. Leider bin ich mir nicht so sicher, ob alles "perfekt" ist.
Wenn es möglich ist, würde ich um Korrekturvorschläge bitten. Das wäre das super.
Ich bedanke mich schon mal!!!
LG
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Bild anhängen bzw. verlinken ging leider nicht:
Link zum Cover Letter: postimage.org/image.php?v=aV1LDBFi
Cover Letter geschrieben - bräuchte Korrektur
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Damit wollte ich eigentlich denen vorbeugen, die sich die copy+paste - Funktion zueigen gemacht haben, anstatt sich selbst zu bemühen. 
Dann halt so:
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With more than 5 years experience in office administration, I am able to demonstrate proficiency in administrative functions, such as reception, preparation and organisation of documents, appointment and meeting scheduling, data entry and management and, as a matter of course, internal and external communications using different media.
In addition, I have experience in interacting with customers and business partners, on the basis of my broad hospitality background. Through successfully dealing with clients, I achieved set goals an was able to build and maintain relationships which benefited the company.
I would contribute not only these administrative skills, but also an open, organized and professional attitude to adapt to fit in the new role quickly.
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LG
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Dann halt so:
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With more than 5 years experience in office administration, I am able to demonstrate proficiency in administrative functions, such as reception, preparation and organisation of documents, appointment and meeting scheduling, data entry and management and, as a matter of course, internal and external communications using different media.
In addition, I have experience in interacting with customers and business partners, on the basis of my broad hospitality background. Through successfully dealing with clients, I achieved set goals an was able to build and maintain relationships which benefited the company.
I would contribute not only these administrative skills, but also an open, organized and professional attitude to adapt to fit in the new role quickly.
...
LG
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