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Live in a big city or in a small town is a controversial issue.
Some people say that you have more nature and peacefull living in a small town. The air in a town is cleaner and it is not so many pollution. Another advantage is that in a town are not so many cars they can pollut the enviroment. The live in a town is not so stressfull too. The infrastructure in a town is not so good. In a smale town you need mostly for all transactions a car. That can be very expansiv if you need for all transactions a car.
Another disadvantage is that the ways to work or to a doctor are very long. You have not so many possibilities to do some things like in a city. In a city you have many possibilities to do nice things like go to a theater, club or concert. Of the other hand the people know more about you. That can be a advantage but a disadvantage too. If more people know about you it can be a good community between the people. But if more people know about you the people can more talk maybe about bad things and it accrue more rumour about you. In my opinion is live in a city for young people better because you have more possibilities to do some thing and it is not so boring for young peolpe and kids to live in a city. But I can imagine that it is nice to live in a peacfull town when I`m older.
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Life [Nomen] living[verb] in a big city or in a small town is a controversial issue.
The air in a town is cleaner and it is not so many pollution. [Ist da nicht gerade viel Umweltverschmutzung?] Another advantage is that in a town are not so many cars they can pollute the environment. [Wenig Autos in einer Stadt?] The life in a town is not so stressfull, too [?]
was meinst du mit dem Wort town?
Town = Stadt
Suburbs = Vorort
Village = Dorf
City = Stadt
The air in a town is cleaner and it is not so many pollution. [Ist da nicht gerade viel Umweltverschmutzung?] Another advantage is that in a town are not so many cars they can pollute the environment. [Wenig Autos in einer Stadt?] The life in a town is not so stressfull, too [?]
was meinst du mit dem Wort town?
Town = Stadt
Suburbs = Vorort
Village = Dorf
City = Stadt
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michael123
Whether or not to live in a big city is a controversial issue
Some people say that living in a village is more peaceful and closer to nature.
The air in the village is cleaner and not as polluted.
cars which can pollute the environment.
Life in a village is not so stressful, either.
In a small village you need a car for nearly all shopping.
It can be very expensive to use a car for all transactions.
Another disadvantage is that medical care and work can be a long way away.
There are not as many opportunities to do things in a village as there are in a city.
In a city there aremany possibilities
On the other hand people know more about you.
A good community can be formed
People can talk more about bad things and maybe spread rumours about you (accrue does not fit)
In my opinion living in a city is better for young people because it is not as boring as living in a village and there are a lot of opportunities.
However I would like to live in a peaceful village when I am [I'm is only when speaking] older.
Spelling:
smale - small
pollut - pollute
peolpe - people
expansiv - expensive
peacefull - peaceful
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Some people say that living in a village is more peaceful and closer to nature.
The air in the village is cleaner and not as polluted.
cars which can pollute the environment.
Life in a village is not so stressful, either.
In a small village you need a car for nearly all shopping.
It can be very expensive to use a car for all transactions.
Another disadvantage is that medical care and work can be a long way away.
There are not as many opportunities to do things in a village as there are in a city.
In a city there aremany possibilities
On the other hand people know more about you.
A good community can be formed
People can talk more about bad things and maybe spread rumours about you (accrue does not fit)
In my opinion living in a city is better for young people because it is not as boring as living in a village and there are a lot of opportunities.
However I would like to live in a peaceful village when I am [I'm is only when speaking] older.
Spelling:
smale - small
pollut - pollute
peolpe - people
expansiv - expensive
peacefull - peaceful
Remember:
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Word meanings