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Unfortunately I cannot do better.
I would really be so happy if someone of you would suggest some corrections.
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Letter of recommendation
Since October 200X Mrs. X, born date month year, is enrolled at the X University. At the moment she is attending the third semester of her studies in Technology and Management oriented Business Administration.
During my undergraduadte lectures I was able to get to know Mrs. X´s personality. I could assure myself of her at all times available knowledge and her outstanding technical skills in the domain of law. The confident usage of juristic working methods is also reflected in her written exams, which are marked by a well-structured reasoning which always led to a very good evaluation of her performances.
Mrs. X regards the possibility to spend a semester at a reputable university abroad as a great opportunity to advance personally and academically. Her extraordinary enthousiasm, is based on her strong interest in foreign countries. Mrs. X is sure that the eastern and south-eastern part of Asia offers unique possibilities in getting to experiencing foreign cultures and religions.
I am convinced that Mrs. Durst will both benefit on a personal as well as on a professional level and get closer to reaching her job-related goals. I am certain that Mrs. X will enlarge her intercultural communication skills through the practical experience of new methods of teaching and learning. Due to her outstanding work enthousiasm and her extended dimension/ high level of persistence, I am certain that Mrs. X will without a doubt take advantage of this situation in order to ameliorate her global competitiveness.
I am absolutely convinced that she will meet the high requirements of a reputable university in Asia to utter satisfaction. Obviously, I have no doubts recommending Mrs. X.
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Letter of recommendation
Since October 200X, Mrs. X has studied at X University. Currently she is attending the third semester of her studies in Technology and Management oriented Business Administration.
During my undergraduate lectures I got to know Mrs. X´s personality and learned to expect her consistently sharp mind and outstanding technical skills in the domain of law. Her confident usage ("usage" does not seem to work quite right here... instead try using a word like "knowledge" or "understanding") of juristic working methods was reflected in her written exams. There was a mature, well-structured reasoning in her writing that always led to very good evaluations of her performance.
Mrs. X regards the possibility to spend a semester at a reputable university abroad as a great opportunity to advance personally and academically. Her extraordinary enthusiasm is based on her strong interest in foreign countries. She is sure that the eastern and south-eastern parts of Asia offer unique possibilities in experiencing foreign cultures and religions.
I am convinced that Mrs. Durst will benefit both on a personal as well as a professional level and get closer to reaching her job-related goals. I am certain that Mrs. X will improve her intercultural communication skills through practical application of new teaching and learning methods. Due to her outstanding work enthusiasm and her high level of persistence, I have no doub that Mrs. X will take full advantage of this opportunity in order to ameliorate (I think this is not the right word to choose. Perhaps use something like "boost" or "promote") her global competitiveness.
There is no doubt in my mind that Mrs. X will meet up to the high requirements of a reputable university in Asia and it is a pleasure to offer my sincere recommendation.
How about this?Letter of recommendation
Since October 200X, Mrs. X has studied at X University. Currently she is attending the third semester of her studies in Technology and Management oriented Business Administration.
During my undergraduate lectures I got to know Mrs. X´s personality and learned to expect her consistently sharp mind and outstanding technical skills in the domain of law. Her confident usage ("usage" does not seem to work quite right here... instead try using a word like "knowledge" or "understanding") of juristic working methods was reflected in her written exams. There was a mature, well-structured reasoning in her writing that always led to very good evaluations of her performance.
Mrs. X regards the possibility to spend a semester at a reputable university abroad as a great opportunity to advance personally and academically. Her extraordinary enthusiasm is based on her strong interest in foreign countries. She is sure that the eastern and south-eastern parts of Asia offer unique possibilities in experiencing foreign cultures and religions.
I am convinced that Mrs. Durst will benefit both on a personal as well as a professional level and get closer to reaching her job-related goals. I am certain that Mrs. X will improve her intercultural communication skills through practical application of new teaching and learning methods. Due to her outstanding work enthusiasm and her high level of persistence, I have no doub that Mrs. X will take full advantage of this opportunity in order to ameliorate (I think this is not the right word to choose. Perhaps use something like "boost" or "promote") her global competitiveness.
There is no doubt in my mind that Mrs. X will meet up to the high requirements of a reputable university in Asia and it is a pleasure to offer my sincere recommendation.