Hey,
I had to write an obituary of Victor Fogg, a character of Moonpalace, written by Paul Auster.
Perhaps you can correct the language. It shouldn´t be common speech.
Perhaps somebody of you had already read Moonpalace and can also can pay attention to the content a bit, but that isn´t necessary.
Obituary of Victor Fogg
Victor Fogg was a clarinetist and admired making music.
He was born in 1912 and he even played in the Cleveland orchestra with 30 years.
He stayed there for three years, then playing at some other little orchestras, before returning to Chicago in the 1950s, where her cared for his nephew who had lost his mother, while Victor himsolf has lost his sister.
A few years later he founded a musician group with a friend and three other musicians. They called theirselves the Moon Man.
With this group he ravelled through America´s Wesr, where he died in a town in Idaho on account of an heart attack.
He was buried in Chicago next to his sister.
Obituary - could you correct my text,please?
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Mabele
Obituary of Victor Fogg
Victor Fogg was a clarinetist and admired making music.
He was born in 1912 and even with 30 years he played in the Cleveland orchestra .
He stayed there for three years, then playing at some other little orchestras, before returning to Chicago in the 1950s where her cared for his nephew who had lost his mother, while Victor himself has lost his sister.
A few years later he found a musician group with a friend and three other musicians. They called themselves the Moon Man.
With this group he travelled through America´s West, where he died in a town in Idaho on account of an heart attack.
He was buried in Chicago next to his sister.
Victor Fogg was a clarinetist and admired making music.
He was born in 1912 and even with 30 years he played in the Cleveland orchestra .
He stayed there for three years, then playing at some other little orchestras, before returning to Chicago in the 1950s where her cared for his nephew who had lost his mother, while Victor himself has lost his sister.
A few years later he found a musician group with a friend and three other musicians. They called themselves the Moon Man.
With this group he travelled through America´s West, where he died in a town in Idaho on account of an heart attack.
He was buried in Chicago next to his sister.