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Do we need a bigger airport in Schönefeld is a controversial issue.
Is often argued that Berlin need a bigger airport for more international credit. Many politician think we need the bigger airport for a better economy.
In contrast to that protest the resident against the bigger airport because it will be to loud.
On the one hand the airport will be better for the economy but on the other hand the airport will make many pollution. A other argument is that the bigger airport will be to loud. A positive site of a bigger airport is that more jobs can accrue.
A other fact is that the project is very expensive but it is an advantage that more people can fly away from the airport and so you can earn more money with the new airport.
The environmentalists are against the project because many forst area will be stubbed.
To put it in a nutshell the big airport project have many supporter and antis. In my opinion we need a bigger airport for a better economy.
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Mum
Do we need a bigger airport in Schönefeld is a controversial issue.
It is often argued that Berlin needs a bigger airport for more international credit. Many politicians think we need a bigger airport for a better economy.
In contrast to that protest, the residents are against a bigger airport because it would be too loud.
On one hand the airport might be better for the economy but on the other hand it could cause a lot of pollution. *Another argument is that a bigger airport would be too loud. A positive side of building a bigger airport is that more jobs could accrue.
**Another fact is that the project is very expensive but it has the advantage that more people would fly away from the airport then we could earn more money from the new airport.
The environmentalists are against the project because many forest areas would be stubbed.
To put it in a nutshell, the big airport project ***has many supporters and antis. In my opinion we need a bigger airport for a better economy.
Suggestions:
* (you've written this sentence twice): Another argument is that a bigger airport would be too loud.
**(you could write): Another fact is that, although the project is very expensive, it has the advantage that more people would use the airport which means that more money could be earned from it.
***supporters as antis = als
(perhaps better to write): the big airport project has as many supporters as antis.
Good luck!
Mum
PS. remember:
to = to be
too = too much
It is often argued that Berlin needs a bigger airport for more international credit. Many politicians think we need a bigger airport for a better economy.
In contrast to that protest, the residents are against a bigger airport because it would be too loud.
On one hand the airport might be better for the economy but on the other hand it could cause a lot of pollution. *Another argument is that a bigger airport would be too loud. A positive side of building a bigger airport is that more jobs could accrue.
**Another fact is that the project is very expensive but it has the advantage that more people would fly away from the airport then we could earn more money from the new airport.
The environmentalists are against the project because many forest areas would be stubbed.
To put it in a nutshell, the big airport project ***has many supporters and antis. In my opinion we need a bigger airport for a better economy.
Suggestions:
* (you've written this sentence twice): Another argument is that a bigger airport would be too loud.
**(you could write): Another fact is that, although the project is very expensive, it has the advantage that more people would use the airport which means that more money could be earned from it.
***supporters as antis = als
(perhaps better to write): the big airport project has as many supporters as antis.
Good luck!
Mum
PS. remember:
to = to be
too = too much