Hallo Leute ,
Ich muss es sagen dass dieses eine Super Seite zum lernen ist
Kommen wir zur sache wir mussten als Hausaufgabe Feherfrei einen Text über Kinder Arbeit schreiben! Ich habe eins Ich wollte euch nur nach der Korrektur oder nach verbesserungsvorschläge bitten! Ist mir sehr wichtig:
I think child labour is very bad. On the one hand child labour is very hard for children. The families of the children are very poor and the children must earn money for their families. The money that the children earn, get the parents. They buy foods and drinks. The children must give the money to their parents. They can´t buy somethink for themselves. The Children haven´t got enough money for books. Without books they can´t go to school.
But on the other hand, the children have got responsibility. They learn to know the hard faces of live.
Later if they have got families they will know, what they have to do.
They will know the word "working" very good!
Edit: Hallo leute wir müssen auch noch in ENGLISH erfahrungen darüber schreiben, was wir ausserhalb der Schule mit der Englishen sprache angefangen haben, wann und wo es uns genutzt hat !wär nett, wenn mir einer ein muster geben, würde, denn ich weis nicht was ich mit dieser aufgabe anfangen solll!
Dankke für alle Hilfen
mfg
Bitte dringend um Korrektor oder Verbesserungsvorschläge :-)
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boert
I think child labour is very bad. On the one hand child labour is very hard for children. The families of the children are very poor and the children must earn money for their families.
The money that the children earn, get the parents. They buy foods and drinks (Kaufen sie nicht eher Lebensmittel im allgemeinen?)
The children must give the money to their parents. (Sagtest du bereits)
They can´t buy somethink g for themselves. The Children haven´t got enough money for books. Without books they can´t go to school.
But on the other hand, the children have got responsibility. They learn to know the hard faces of live.
Later if they have got families they will know, what they have to do.
They will know the word "working" very good!
Meinst du die letzten 3 Sätze ernst?
The money that the children earn, get the parents. They buy foods and drinks (Kaufen sie nicht eher Lebensmittel im allgemeinen?)
The children must give the money to their parents. (Sagtest du bereits)
They can´t buy somethin
But on the other hand, the children have got responsibility. They learn to know the hard faces of live.
Later if they have got families they will know, what they have to do.
They will know the word "working" very good!
Meinst du die letzten 3 Sätze ernst?