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Hallo
I will this schoolyear improve my English. Can someone control the sentences. We should think out two or three sentences of a room.
Wir sollten für verschiedene Gegenstände in einem Raum uns mindestens drei Sätze ausdenken. Kann mal jemand einen Blick draufwerfen ob sie richtig sind?

This is a door.
Sometimes the door is open and sometimes the door is closed.
The door is open. I walk through the door.
My friends came through the tiny door.

This is a window. The window in my room is very dirty. Anytime I must clean the window.
What are your plans for his day? Today I will clean my windows at home.

This is a table. When I do my homework, my table is full of school things.
The new furniture’s are beautiful, especially the table is amazing.

And this is a chair. When a party is very boring, then I sit on a chair.
We still need two chairs for my birthday party. When the convention begin’s, we need more chairs.

This is a box. When I have money, I put it in a box. My greatest secrets are in a box.
My brother said this is a box in my hands. But I said that is a box next the cupboard.
Does this box belong to you?

This is a bottle. At home there many bottles on the table. When a bottle is empty, I bring it to a container. This isn’t a bottle. I’m very thirsty. Can I buy a bottle of water?

Oh it starting to raining, and I forgotten my umbrella. Excuse me, can I have your umbrella?
Sorry Sir, but I think the umbrella doesn’t belong to you?

Yesterday I buy a new clock, but it was very expensive. I believe the clock goes wrong.
In the morning, when I run to the school bus, I forgot my clock.

Can someone correct these sentences?
Thank you very much.

Kaine

Milo

Beitrag von Milo »

Hi,
I try to correct ( :spin: ohne Gewähr):

your first English sentence:

I will improve my English this schoolyear. (Satzbau)
We should think out two or three sentences of a room.
I see more than "two or three" sentences? Well, doesn't matter.

your story:
This is a door. [/s]
The door can be opened or closed.
If the door is open, I will walk through.
My friends come through the(this) tiny door.

This is a window. The window in my room is very dirty. Sometimes I must clean the window.
What are your plans for this day? I will clean my windows at home, today.

This is a table. If I do my homework, my table will be full of school things.
The new pieces (?) of furniture are beautiful, especially the table is amazing.

And this is a chair. If a party is very boring, I will sit on a chair.
We still need two chairs for my birthday party. When the convention begins, we need more chairs.

This is a box. When I have money, I will put it in a box. My greatest secrets are in a box.
My brother says this should be a box in my hands. But I say that is a box next the cupboard.
Does this box belong to you?

This is a bottle. At home there are many bottles on the table. When a bottle is empty, I will bring it to a container. This isn’t a bottle. I’m very thirsty. Can I buy a bottle of water?

Oh it is starting to rain, and I forget my umbrella. Excuse me, can I have your umbrella?
Sorry Sir, but I think the umbrella doesn’t belong to you?!

Yesterday I buy a new clock, but it was very expensive. I believe the clock goes/runs (?) wrong.
In the morning, when I run to the school bus, I forgot my clock.

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Hmm, ob das jetzt alles so stimmt, was ich da gemacht hab? Am besten die Profis schauen nochmal drüber ('n bisschen was hab ich auch verändert, weil es vorher komisch klang).

Was du beachten musst:
- Wenn du einen Satz mit If (bzw. When (?)) anfängst, musst du nach dem Komma in einer anderen Zeitform schreiben. Genauer erklärt ist das hier: http://www.englisch-hilfen.de/grammar_list/if.htm

- Wenn du wegen he/she/it ein "s" an ein Verb dranhängen willst, musst du das direkt dranhängen (nicht mit " ´ ". Das nimmt man nur, wenn man is verkürzt (Bsp. He`s going = He is going)