Hallo!
Ich wusste nicht, wo ich mein Anliegen sonst hinschreiben sollte. Ich möchte, dass bitte jemand den folgenden Text auf seine Richtigkeit überprüft.DRINGEND!!! Bitte angeben, wo Fehler sind und Korregierungsvorschläge angeben!
1) Being full of hope, he went to California.
2) While he went to California, he was always thinking of his family and his friends, but his pleasure excelled the feelings to his family.
3) When he was arrived, he wanted straightaway to work in a goldmine.
4) He went to the goldmine in the near of him, looked for a place, where he could sleep and tried his luck in ´this goldmine.
5) After the day he was arrived, he bought an equipment to find gold.
6) He worked every day in the very big heat.
7) After six month, he founded so much gold, that he could make possible his family to go to California.
8) He sent a letter to his family and after eight weekes he hold his family in his arms.
9) He thought, that the idea to went to California was the best idea in his life.
10) On one day he had so much money , that he bought the gold mine.
11) It was the exitingest? time in his life.
12) He did not believe, that the first goldmine was an absolute hit.
13) He was the boss of his own company, which wanted to find gold in a lot of mines, but he did not sly away from working hard himself.
14) Every day he worked hard, although he was so rich, that he needed not to work. But one day, while Klaus was working in the mine one of the tunnels collapsed and he and three other workers were spilled.
15) These four people died of starvation.
16) His Company exists until today and has his name.
Vielen Dank im Vorraus!
Hilfe! Schnell! Schnell!
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poolboy
Habe mal versucht alles soweit zu korrigieren, ohne zuviel zu verändern, jedoch gebe ich keine Garantie für Fehlerfreiheit ab.
1) Full of hope he went to California.
2) While he went to California, he was always thinking of his family and his friends, but his joy excelled the feelings to his family.
3) When he arrived he wanted to work in a goldmine straight away.
4) He went to the next goldmine and looked for a place where he could sleep and try his luck.
5) The day after his arrival he bought some equipment for a gold mine.
6) He worked every day in the blistering(glühenden) heat.
7) After six months he found so many gold, that he could make it possible to move his family to California.
He sent a letter to his family and after eight weeks he could hold his family in his arms.
9) He thought, that his idea(Entscheidung: decision passt vielleicht besser) to go to California, was the best idea in his life.
10) One day(oder some day) he had enough money and he bought the gold mine.
11) It was the most exciting time in his life.
12) He could not believe, that the first goldmine in his life was a hit.
13) He was the boss of his own company, which wanted to find gold in a lot of mines, but he was always working hard himself.
??? Die Aussage habe ich erst nicht verstanden!
14) Although he was so rich that he could stop working he worked hard every day. But one day, while Klaus was working in the mine, one of the tunnels collapsed and he and three other workers were blocked up.
15) These four people died of hunger.
16) His Company is still existing today under his name.
1) Full of hope he went to California.
2) While he went to California, he was always thinking of his family and his friends, but his joy excelled the feelings to his family.
3) When he arrived he wanted to work in a goldmine straight away.
4) He went to the next goldmine and looked for a place where he could sleep and try his luck.
5) The day after his arrival he bought some equipment for a gold mine.
6) He worked every day in the blistering(glühenden) heat.
7) After six months he found so many gold, that he could make it possible to move his family to California.
He sent a letter to his family and after eight weeks he could hold his family in his arms. 9) He thought, that his idea(Entscheidung: decision passt vielleicht besser) to go to California, was the best idea in his life.
10) One day(oder some day) he had enough money and he bought the gold mine.
11) It was the most exciting time in his life.
12) He could not believe, that the first goldmine in his life was a hit.
13) He was the boss of his own company, which wanted to find gold in a lot of mines, but he was always working hard himself.
??? Die Aussage habe ich erst nicht verstanden!
14) Although he was so rich that he could stop working he worked hard every day. But one day, while Klaus was working in the mine, one of the tunnels collapsed and he and three other workers were blocked up.
15) These four people died of hunger.
16) His Company is still existing today under his name.
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maedko
ich wohne in den usa, deshalb kann ich gut englisch. diese sind richtig:
1) Full of hope, he went to California.
2) While in California, he was always thinking of his family and friends, but his joy overcame those feelings.
3) When he arrived, he wanted to work in a goldmine right away.
4) He went to the next goldmine and looked for a place where he could sleep and try his luck.
5) The day after his arrival, he bought some equipment for a gold mine.
6) He worked every day in the blistering(glühenden) heat.
7) After six months, he found so much gold that it was now possible to move his family to California.
Laughing, he sent a letter to his family and eight weeks later, he would be able to hold his family in his arms.
9) He thought that his idea(Entscheidung: decision passt vielleicht besser) to go to California was the best idea in his life.
die sätze, die du geschrieben hast, waren ganz toll, aber ich habe mehr kommata benützt, um die besser zu klingen. ich habe auch worte geändert. schreib mir, wenn du was für fragen hast!
1) Full of hope, he went to California.
2) While in California, he was always thinking of his family and friends, but his joy overcame those feelings.
3) When he arrived, he wanted to work in a goldmine right away.
4) He went to the next goldmine and looked for a place where he could sleep and try his luck.
5) The day after his arrival, he bought some equipment for a gold mine.
6) He worked every day in the blistering(glühenden) heat.
7) After six months, he found so much gold that it was now possible to move his family to California.
Laughing, he sent a letter to his family and eight weeks later, he would be able to hold his family in his arms.
9) He thought that his idea(Entscheidung: decision passt vielleicht besser) to go to California was the best idea in his life.
die sätze, die du geschrieben hast, waren ganz toll, aber ich habe mehr kommata benützt, um die besser zu klingen. ich habe auch worte geändert. schreib mir, wenn du was für fragen hast!
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Manhattan
maedko hat geschrieben:ok, well i definetly know that i am 15 and have lived in the usa all my life. i just started learning german last year. y does every say that my english sucks? according to my englisch teacher, i have the best understanding of english grammar in my class. next time u wanna say stuff like that, make sure u can back yerself up
du lernst erst seit einem jahr deutsch? dafür ist es aber verdammt gut
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Manhattan