Also könnt ihr mir sagen die fehler, die ich im text vorkommen. Auf Schreibfehler bitte nicht achten.
Me and my best friend.
Today I was very buzy.In my high school all pupils have to work very hard, and me too. The busdriver drive me home. My arms were full of the books. I got tired with my high school education.
Suddenly I saw her, I saw Mary, I saw my best friend. I didnt believe it, because I didnt saw her for ten years. We were equal. At the primary school we were like twins with same coloured ribbons in hair and with equal shyness. All our common school times We have took rat in more competition between us. For exemple I remember the competition for tor desk. "Desk for the most successful pupels in class after each test ". We were the best friends.
Than came the time to choise our ways. Marys father was a strong and contrasting strangly man with elegant greyhouns by his side.His big problem was that he didnt believe in high school education. He thank the high school education is very probably especially for girls.
I didnt see Mary long time, exactly ten years. Today was the huppiest day in my life, because I saw at last Mary again. She sat near me on the bus. All things were changed in our life. Mary was married. Her husband is a nice and tall man with curly hair. Happy faces and Happy Smiles. I was very happy for Mary. It was wonderful.
I was coming home with my arms full of books and I was thinking about the time when the choices got made.
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gibt es weniger fehler?
Und bitte sagt mir meine fehler
Me and my best friend.
Today I was very busy.In my high school all pupils have to work very hard, and me too. I went by bus home. My arms were full of the books. I got tired of more information that i have to learn for my next lessons.
Suddenly I saw her, I saw Mary, I saw my best friend. I didnt believe it, because I didnt see her for ten years. At the primary school we were like twins with same coloured ribbons in hair and with equal shyness. Over All our school time we have took part in more competition between us. For example I remember the competition for top desk. "Desk for the most successful pupils in class after each test ". We were the best friends.
Then came time to choose our ways. Marys father was a strong and contrasting strangly man with elegant greyhounds by his side.His big problem was that he didnt believe in high school education. He thought the high school education is very problematically especially for girls.
I didnt see Mary ten years. Today was the happiest day in my life, because I saw Mary again. She sat beside me on the bus. All was changed in our life. Mary was married.
Her husband is a nice and tall man with curly hair. Happy faces and Happy Smiles. I was very happy for Mary. It was wonderful. And I was coming home and thinking about the time when the choices got made.
Und bitte sagt mir meine fehler
Me and my best friend.
Today I was very busy.In my high school all pupils have to work very hard, and me too. I went by bus home. My arms were full of the books. I got tired of more information that i have to learn for my next lessons.
Suddenly I saw her, I saw Mary, I saw my best friend. I didnt believe it, because I didnt see her for ten years. At the primary school we were like twins with same coloured ribbons in hair and with equal shyness. Over All our school time we have took part in more competition between us. For example I remember the competition for top desk. "Desk for the most successful pupils in class after each test ". We were the best friends.
Then came time to choose our ways. Marys father was a strong and contrasting strangly man with elegant greyhounds by his side.His big problem was that he didnt believe in high school education. He thought the high school education is very problematically especially for girls.
I didnt see Mary ten years. Today was the happiest day in my life, because I saw Mary again. She sat beside me on the bus. All was changed in our life. Mary was married.
Her husband is a nice and tall man with curly hair. Happy faces and Happy Smiles. I was very happy for Mary. It was wonderful. And I was coming home and thinking about the time when the choices got made.