Kurze Prüfung eines Briefes

[L2k4]

Hallo, ich habe eben eine kurze eMail verfasst, von der ich glaube das sie grammatikalisch nicht ganz korrekt ist. Würde mich freuen, wenn sie jemand kurz durchlesen und ggf. verbessern könnte.

Dear Sir and Madam,

I am a student of ### at university in Germany. I am planning to apply for the international master programme of Informations Systems at ### after my Bachelor Degree next year. After I read the prerequesites on ### website I am wondering if there is a certain grade point average you need to will be accepted?

I would be grateful if you could respond my question.
If hope to hearing from you.

Kind regards
###

### soll bedeuten das da Namen oder Institutionen rein kommen.

Grüße
Patrick

[Deccius]

Es gab nur ein paar Fehler.

Dear Sir and Madam,

I am a student of ### at ("currently attending" wäre besser als "at") university in Germany. I am planning to apply for the international master programme of Informations Systems at ### after my Bachelor Degree next year. After I read the prerequisites on ### website I am wondering if there is a certain grade point average you need to will be accepted?

I would be grateful if you could respond to my question.
If hope to hearing from you.

Kind regards
###

[L2k4]

Oh Naja, aber vielen Dank für die Verbesserung

Es gab nur ein paar Fehler.

Dear Sir and Madam,

I am a student of ### at ("currently attending" wäre besser als "at") university in Germany. I am planning to apply for the international master programme of Informations Systems at ### after my Bachelor Degree next year. After I read the prerequisites on ### website I am wondering if there is a certain grade point average you need to will be accepted?

I would be grateful if you could respond to my question.
If hope to hearing from you.

Kind regards
###