Hallo, ich muss morgen (kurzfristig) ein Englisch Referat über "Black America and Martin Luther King" halten, da dies sehr entscheidend für meine endnote ist, wäre es sehr freundlich wenn ihr euch meinen Text einmal durchlesen würdet und wer Englisch kann die deutschen Stellen vlt ins Englische übersetzen könnte:
Today I make my presentation about Black America and Martin Luther King.
The time of the slaves began in the Year 1619 when the first slaves came from Africa.
In 1820 the northern states, where lots of new factories and industries growing, the people there no longer needed slaves.
But the white people of the southern states felt they still needed slaves to work in their farms and plantations. In 1861 they had over 4 million slaves.
In 1861 eleven southern states left to the United States.
Lincoln the new president decided to keep the country together and the Civil War had begun. When it ended in 1865, over half million people dead and all slaves were free.
But the fight for real freedom wasn’t over yet. White groups like the Ku Klux Klan attacked black in their homes and churches and many of the southern states separated white and blacks in everyday life. In 1959 56% of black Americans still lived in poverty*, but only 11% of white Americans.
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Den weiteren Text unten kann ich nicht richtig übersetzen ich versuche es einfach einmal, das deutsche Original steht dann unter dem Englischen Text damit ihr wisst worum es geht und es wenn möglich bitte verbessern könnt:
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The negreos don´t get into normal busses, schools or chirches.
Die schwarzen Amerikaner durften nicht in normale Busse, Schulen oder Kirchen.
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And now to Martin Luther King.
Und nun zu Martin Luther King.
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He was born on the 15. January 1929 in Atlanta, Georga.
After the school und the study he works as pastor.
Er wurde am 15.Januar 1929 in Atlanta, Georgia geboren, nach der Schule und dem Studium arbeitete er als Pfarrer.
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On the 18. June 1953 he married Coretta Williams. King and Scott had together four kids.
Am 18. Juni 1953 heiratete er Coretta Scott Williams. King und Scott hatten zusammen vier Kinder.
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Den Text kann ich nicht übersetzen.
Als am 1.12.1955 die schwarze Rosa Parks verhaftet wurde, weil sie sich weigerte, im Bus für einen Weißen Platz zu machen.
Dies löste große Aufstände der schwarzen Bevölkerung aus.
Die schwarze Bevölkerung wehrte sich und rief zum Boykott der Städtischen Busse auf, der gewaltlose Widerstand endete 1956 mit dem Erfolg, dass der Oberste Gerichtshof jede Art von Rassentrennung in den Bussen der Stadt Montgomery verbot, Martin Luther King trat bei dieser Bewegung das erstmal in Erscheinung.
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Martin Luther Kings GRÖßTER ERFOLG was his speech "I have a dream" on 28. August 1963 in Washington D.C., on this were more then 250.000 peoples.
Martin Luther Kings größter Erfolg war seine rede „I have a dream“ am 28. August 1963 in Washington D.C., an der mehr als 250.000 Menschen teilnahmen.
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Here a litte ...? from his speech:
Hier ein kleiner Ausschnitt aus der rede:
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(der folgende Text ist schon vollständig englisch mit deutscher übersetzung und muss nicht mehr bearbeitet werden)
I have a dream that one day this nation will rise up and live out the true meaning of its creed: ,We hold these truths to be self-evident: that all men are created equal.‘
”I have a dream that one day on the red hills of Georgia the sons of former slaves and the sons of former slaveowners will be able to sit down together at a table of brotherhood.
I have a dream that one day even the state of Mississippi, a desert state, sweltering with the heat of injustice and sweltering with the heat of oppression, will be transformed into an oasis of freedom and justice.
I have a dream that my four little children will one day live in a nation where they will not be judged by the color of their skin but by the content of their character.
I have a dream today.”
„Ich habe einen Traum, dass sich eines Tages diese Nation erheben wird und die wahre Bedeutung ihres Glaubensbekenntnisses ausleben wird: ‚Für uns soll als selbstverständlich gelten: Alle Menschen sind als gleich geschaffen.‘
Ich habe einen Traum, dass eines Tages auf den roten Hügeln von Georgia die Söhne früherer Sklaven und die Söhne früherer Sklavenhalter miteinander am Tisch der Brüderlichkeit sitzen können.
Ich habe einen Traum, dass eines Tages selbst der Staat Mississippi, ein Wüstenstaat, der in der Hitze der Ungerechtigkeit und in der Hitze der Unterdrückung verschmachtet, in eine Oase der Freiheit und Gerechtigkeit verwandelt wird.
Ich habe einen Traum, dass meine vier kleinen Kinder eines Tages in einer Nation leben werden, in der man sie nicht nach ihrer Hautfarbe, sondern nach ihrem Charakter beurteilt.
Ich habe einen Traum, heute!“
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(ab jetzt brauch ich wieder hilfe )
On the 4. April 1968 at 6.01 pm - weiter kann ich selbst leider nicht übersetzen -
Am 4. April 1968 um 18.01 Uhr wurde Dr. King auf dem Balkon des Lorraine Motels erschossen. FBI-Agenten, die ihn observierten, rannten nach dem Schuss sofort zu King und waren die ersten, die Erste Hilfe leisteten – vergeblich. In über 100 Städten kam es nach der Ermordung Kings zu Krawallen, bei denen 39 Menschen ums Leben kamen, 2.000 verletzt und 10.000 Personen verhaftet wurden; Washington D.C. wurde von sehr schweren Unruhen erschüttert.
Martin Luther King zählt weltweit zu den wichtigsten Vertretern im Kampf gegen die Unterdrückung der Afroamerikaner und Schwarzafrikaner und für soziale Gerechtigkeit. King, der immer die Gewaltlosigkeit predigte, wurde dreimal tätlich angegriffen, überlebte mindestens ein Bombenattentat und wurde zwischen 1955 und 1968 mehr als 30 Mal inhaftiert.
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Ich weiß es handelt sich um viel hilfsbedürftigkeit, normalerweise würde ich mich stundenlang hinsetzen und im Wörterbuch nachschlagen, doch da es eben wirklich sehr kurzfristig ist, brauche ich momentan wirklich einiges an Hilfe und bitte an alle Leute die gut Englisch können mir ein großes bisschen unter die Arme zu greifen, danke.
Ich weiß auch, das es vlt nicht ganz richtig ist was ich mache, aber meine englisch Note ist sehr wichtig für meine Bewerbung und ich möchte diese nicht wegen des kurzfristigen Referates auf das Spiel setzen und viele der oben genannten Wörter gehören leider nicht zu dem, was man in 4 Jahren englisch unterricht lernt.
Wichtiges Referat
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boert
Wenn du dich nicht "ein paar" sondern zum Beispiel nur 2 Stunden hinsetzt und http://www.dict.cc zur Hilfe nimmst, dürftest du zumindest einen Teil übersetzt bekommen.
Die ersten Sätze lesen sich ja schonmal nicht schlecht, daher würde ich vorschlagen du machst dich an die Arbeit und stellst anschließend dein komplettes Referat als einen zusammenhängen Text hier herein und stellst Anmerkungen deinerseits farblich markiert mit hinein. Dein Beitrag ist so nämlich etwas ... unübersichtlich.
Es wird sich dann sicher jemand finden, der den Text korrigiert.
Übersetzungen machen wir hier nicht.
Die ersten Sätze lesen sich ja schonmal nicht schlecht, daher würde ich vorschlagen du machst dich an die Arbeit und stellst anschließend dein komplettes Referat als einen zusammenhängen Text hier herein und stellst Anmerkungen deinerseits farblich markiert mit hinein. Dein Beitrag ist so nämlich etwas ... unübersichtlich.
Es wird sich dann sicher jemand finden, der den Text korrigiert.
Übersetzungen machen wir hier nicht.
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mysheepy
Re: Wichtiges Referat
Today I make my presentation about Black America and Martin Luther King.
The time of the slaves began in the Year 1619 when the first slaves came from Africa.
In 1820 the northern states, where lots of new factories and industries growing, the people there no longer needed slaves.
But the white people of the southern states felt they still needed slaves to work in their farms and plantations. In 1861 they had over 4 million slaves.
In 1861 eleven southern states left to the United States.
Lincoln the new president decided to keep the country together and the Civil War had begun. When it ended in 1865, over half million people dead and all slaves were free.
But the fight for real freedom wasn’t over yet. White groups like the Ku Klux Klan attacked black in their homes and churches and many of the southern states separated white and blacks in everyday life. In 1959 56% of black Americans still lived in poverty*, but only 11% of white Americans.
The negreos don´t get into normal busses, schools or chirches.
And now to Martin Luther King.
He was born on the 15. January 1929 in Atlanta, Georga.
After the school und the study he works as pastor.
On the 18. June 1953 he married Coretta Williams. King and Scott had together four kids.
As on the 12. December 1955 the black Rosa Parks became arrested, because she refuses to make free her place in a bus.
This triggered big insurgencies from black peoples out.
The black population fended and make a boykott against the City Bus Organisation.
The non-violent protest end 1956 with the triumph that the highest court of law all forms of racialism in the busses of the city Montgomery forbade.
At this Martin Luther King appeared at first into appearance.
Martin Luther Kings biggest triumph was his speech "I have a dream" on 28. August 1963 in Washington D.C., on this were more then 250.000 peoples.
Here a litte cut from his speech:
... hier kommt dann ein schon fertiger ausschnitt...
On the 4. April 1968 at 6.01 pm Martin Luther King are killed by a weapon on the balcony of the Lorraine Motel .
Attempts at resuscitation were futile.
In over 100 Citys it cames to affray after the murder of Martin Luther King.
In this affrey died 39 people, 2000 are hurt and 10.000 people are arrested.
Martin Luther King was one of the importantly peoples into the fight against the racism und for the rights of the black population.
So hab mal versucht alles englisch zu übersetzen, vielen dank für den tipp, ich hoffe ich kann jetzt auf eure hilfe zählen, so das wenn möglich nachher die Zeitformen sowie der text allgemein stimmt, vielen vielen vielen dank im vorraus.
The time of the slaves began in the Year 1619 when the first slaves came from Africa.
In 1820 the northern states, where lots of new factories and industries growing, the people there no longer needed slaves.
But the white people of the southern states felt they still needed slaves to work in their farms and plantations. In 1861 they had over 4 million slaves.
In 1861 eleven southern states left to the United States.
Lincoln the new president decided to keep the country together and the Civil War had begun. When it ended in 1865, over half million people dead and all slaves were free.
But the fight for real freedom wasn’t over yet. White groups like the Ku Klux Klan attacked black in their homes and churches and many of the southern states separated white and blacks in everyday life. In 1959 56% of black Americans still lived in poverty*, but only 11% of white Americans.
The negreos don´t get into normal busses, schools or chirches.
And now to Martin Luther King.
He was born on the 15. January 1929 in Atlanta, Georga.
After the school und the study he works as pastor.
On the 18. June 1953 he married Coretta Williams. King and Scott had together four kids.
As on the 12. December 1955 the black Rosa Parks became arrested, because she refuses to make free her place in a bus.
This triggered big insurgencies from black peoples out.
The black population fended and make a boykott against the City Bus Organisation.
The non-violent protest end 1956 with the triumph that the highest court of law all forms of racialism in the busses of the city Montgomery forbade.
At this Martin Luther King appeared at first into appearance.
Martin Luther Kings biggest triumph was his speech "I have a dream" on 28. August 1963 in Washington D.C., on this were more then 250.000 peoples.
Here a litte cut from his speech:
... hier kommt dann ein schon fertiger ausschnitt...
On the 4. April 1968 at 6.01 pm Martin Luther King are killed by a weapon on the balcony of the Lorraine Motel .
Attempts at resuscitation were futile.
In over 100 Citys it cames to affray after the murder of Martin Luther King.
In this affrey died 39 people, 2000 are hurt and 10.000 people are arrested.
Martin Luther King was one of the importantly peoples into the fight against the racism und for the rights of the black population.
So hab mal versucht alles englisch zu übersetzen, vielen dank für den tipp, ich hoffe ich kann jetzt auf eure hilfe zählen, so das wenn möglich nachher die Zeitformen sowie der text allgemein stimmt, vielen vielen vielen dank im vorraus.
Zuletzt geändert von mysheepy am 18. Jul 2007 15:35, insgesamt 1-mal geändert.
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boert
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mysheepy
Ok dann nochmal hoffe jetzt ist es besser:
Today I want you to tell something about Black America and Martin Luther King.
The time of the slaves began in the Year 1619 when the first slaves came from Africa.
In 1820 the northern states, where lots of new factories and industries growing, the people there no longer needed slaves.
But the white people of the southern states felt they still needed slaves to work in their farms and plantations. In 1861 they had over 4 million slaves.
In 1861 eleven southern states left to the United States.
Lincoln the new president decided to keep the country together and the Civil War had begun. When it ended in 1865, over half million people dead and all slaves were free.
But the fight for real freedom wasn’t over yet. White groups like the Ku Klux Klan attacked black in their homes and churches and many of the southern states separated white and blacks in everyday life. In 1959 56% of black Americans still lived in poverty*, but only 11% of white Americans.
They were not allowed to go by bus or to visit churches or schools.
Now I'll tell something about Martin Luther King
He was born on the 15. January 1929 in Atlanta, Georga.
When he finished school and study he began to work as a pastor
On the 18. June 1953 he married Coretta Williams. King and his wife had four kids
As on the 12. December 1955 the black Rosa Parks became arrested, because she refuses to make free her place in a bus.
This triggered big insurgencies from black people out.
The black population fended and make a boykott against the City Bus Organisation.
The non-violent protest end 1956 with the triumph that the highest court of law all forms of racialism in the busses of the city Montgomery forbade.
At this Martin Luther King appeared at first into appearance.
Martin Luther Kings biggest suggest was his speech "I have a dream" on 28. August 1963 in Washington D.C., on this were more then 250.000 people.
Here a litte cut from his speech:
... hier kommt dann ein schon fertiger ausschnitt...
On the 4. April 1968 at 6.01 pm Martin Luther King are killed by a weapon on the balcony of the Lorraine Motel .
Experience at resuscitation were futile.
In over 100 Citys it cames to affray after the murder of Martin Luther King.
In this affrey died 39 people, 2000 are hurt and 10.000 people are arrested.
Martin Luther King was one of the importantly peoples into the fight against the racism und for the rights of the black population.
Today the black people was accept into the american communty, about 10% of the americans are black. Sadly some people to discriminate against black people, the in american arrested person some 2 Million, 1 Million of these are blacks.
But a few of the black people are meantime popular, for exemple Will Smith, Whoopie Goldberg, Whitney Housten or the american pol. Secretary of State condoleezza rice.
Today I want you to tell something about Black America and Martin Luther King.
The time of the slaves began in the Year 1619 when the first slaves came from Africa.
In 1820 the northern states, where lots of new factories and industries growing, the people there no longer needed slaves.
But the white people of the southern states felt they still needed slaves to work in their farms and plantations. In 1861 they had over 4 million slaves.
In 1861 eleven southern states left to the United States.
Lincoln the new president decided to keep the country together and the Civil War had begun. When it ended in 1865, over half million people dead and all slaves were free.
But the fight for real freedom wasn’t over yet. White groups like the Ku Klux Klan attacked black in their homes and churches and many of the southern states separated white and blacks in everyday life. In 1959 56% of black Americans still lived in poverty*, but only 11% of white Americans.
They were not allowed to go by bus or to visit churches or schools.
Now I'll tell something about Martin Luther King
He was born on the 15. January 1929 in Atlanta, Georga.
When he finished school and study he began to work as a pastor
On the 18. June 1953 he married Coretta Williams. King and his wife had four kids
As on the 12. December 1955 the black Rosa Parks became arrested, because she refuses to make free her place in a bus.
This triggered big insurgencies from black people out.
The black population fended and make a boykott against the City Bus Organisation.
The non-violent protest end 1956 with the triumph that the highest court of law all forms of racialism in the busses of the city Montgomery forbade.
At this Martin Luther King appeared at first into appearance.
Martin Luther Kings biggest suggest was his speech "I have a dream" on 28. August 1963 in Washington D.C., on this were more then 250.000 people.
Here a litte cut from his speech:
... hier kommt dann ein schon fertiger ausschnitt...
On the 4. April 1968 at 6.01 pm Martin Luther King are killed by a weapon on the balcony of the Lorraine Motel .
Experience at resuscitation were futile.
In over 100 Citys it cames to affray after the murder of Martin Luther King.
In this affrey died 39 people, 2000 are hurt and 10.000 people are arrested.
Martin Luther King was one of the importantly peoples into the fight against the racism und for the rights of the black population.
Today the black people was accept into the american communty, about 10% of the americans are black. Sadly some people to discriminate against black people, the in american arrested person some 2 Million, 1 Million of these are blacks.
But a few of the black people are meantime popular, for exemple Will Smith, Whoopie Goldberg, Whitney Housten or the american pol. Secretary of State condoleezza rice.
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mysheepy
Noch einige Fehler gefunden:
Today I want to tell you something about Black America and Martin Luther King.
The time of the slaves began in 1619 when the first slaves came from Africa.
In 1820 the northern states, where lots of new factories and industries were growing, the people there no longer needed slaves.
But the white people of the southern states felt they still needed slaves to work on their farms and plantations. In 1861 they had over 4 million slaves.
In 1861 eleven southern states left to the United States.
Lincoln the new president decided to keep the country together and the Civil War had begun. When it ended in 1865, over a half million people had died and all slaves were free.
But the fight for real freedom wasn’t over yet. White groups like the Ku Klux Klan attacked black in their homes and churches and many of the southern states separated white and blacks in everyday life. In 1959 56% of black Americans still lived in poverty*, but only 11% of white Americans.
They were not allowed to go by bus or to visit churches or schools.
Now I'll tell something about Martin Luther King
He was born on the 15. January 1929 in Atlanta, Georga.
When he finished school and study he began to work as a pastor
On the 18. June 1953 he married Coretta Williams. King and his wife had four kids
As on the 12. December 1955 the black Rosa Parks became arrested, because she refuses to make free her place in a bus.
This triggered big insurgencies from black people out.
The black population fended and make a boykott against the City Bus Organisation.
The non-violent protest end 1956 with the triumph that the highest court of law all forms of racialism in the busses of the city Montgomery forbade.
At this Martin Luther King appeared at first into appearance.
Martin Luther Kings biggest suggest was his speech "I have a dream" on 28. August 1963 in Washington D.C., on this were more then 250.000 people.
Here a litte extract from his speech:
... hier kommt dann ein schon fertiger ausschnitt...
On the 4. April 1968 at 6.01 pm Martin Luther King was killed by a weapon on the balcony of the Lorraine Motel .
Experience at resuscitation was futile.
In over 100 Citys it came to affray after the murder of Martin Luther King.
In this affrey 39 people died, 2000 got hurt and 10.000 people were arrested.
Martin Luther King was one of the most important people in the fight against the racism and for the rights of the black population.
Und noch eine kleine Erweiterung um bezug auf das momentane aufzubauen, bitte auch kontrollieren:
Today the black people was accept into the american communty, about 10% of the americans are black. Sadly some people to discriminate against black people, the in american arrested person some 2 Million, 1 Million of these are blacks.
But a few of the black people are meantime popular, for exemple Will Smith, Whoopie Goldberg, Whitney Housten or the american Secretary of State Condoleezza Rice.
Today I want to tell you something about Black America and Martin Luther King.
The time of the slaves began in 1619 when the first slaves came from Africa.
In 1820 the northern states, where lots of new factories and industries were growing, the people there no longer needed slaves.
But the white people of the southern states felt they still needed slaves to work on their farms and plantations. In 1861 they had over 4 million slaves.
In 1861 eleven southern states left to the United States.
Lincoln the new president decided to keep the country together and the Civil War had begun. When it ended in 1865, over a half million people had died and all slaves were free.
But the fight for real freedom wasn’t over yet. White groups like the Ku Klux Klan attacked black in their homes and churches and many of the southern states separated white and blacks in everyday life. In 1959 56% of black Americans still lived in poverty*, but only 11% of white Americans.
They were not allowed to go by bus or to visit churches or schools.
Now I'll tell something about Martin Luther King
He was born on the 15. January 1929 in Atlanta, Georga.
When he finished school and study he began to work as a pastor
On the 18. June 1953 he married Coretta Williams. King and his wife had four kids
As on the 12. December 1955 the black Rosa Parks became arrested, because she refuses to make free her place in a bus.
This triggered big insurgencies from black people out.
The black population fended and make a boykott against the City Bus Organisation.
The non-violent protest end 1956 with the triumph that the highest court of law all forms of racialism in the busses of the city Montgomery forbade.
At this Martin Luther King appeared at first into appearance.
Martin Luther Kings biggest suggest was his speech "I have a dream" on 28. August 1963 in Washington D.C., on this were more then 250.000 people.
Here a litte extract from his speech:
... hier kommt dann ein schon fertiger ausschnitt...
On the 4. April 1968 at 6.01 pm Martin Luther King was killed by a weapon on the balcony of the Lorraine Motel .
Experience at resuscitation was futile.
In over 100 Citys it came to affray after the murder of Martin Luther King.
In this affrey 39 people died, 2000 got hurt and 10.000 people were arrested.
Martin Luther King was one of the most important people in the fight against the racism and for the rights of the black population.
Und noch eine kleine Erweiterung um bezug auf das momentane aufzubauen, bitte auch kontrollieren:
Today the black people was accept into the american communty, about 10% of the americans are black. Sadly some people to discriminate against black people, the in american arrested person some 2 Million, 1 Million of these are blacks.
But a few of the black people are meantime popular, for exemple Will Smith, Whoopie Goldberg, Whitney Housten or the american Secretary of State Condoleezza Rice.
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Cliff
Re: Wichtiges Referat
Ich möchte Dir nicht das Referat neuschreiben, aber hier ein paar Hinweise:
Today I want to tell you something about Black America and Martin Luther King.
Besser: Today I'd like to give you a short presentation about...
The time of the slaves began in the Year 1619 when the first slaves came from Africa.
In 1820 the northern states, where lots of new factories and industries growing, the people there no longer needed slaves.
besser 'in the 1820s'
aber:
But the white people of the southern states felt they still needed slaves to work in their farms and plantations. In 1861 they had over 4 million slaves.
Der Zeitsprung macht in meinen Augen keinen Sinn, wenn Du einen Vergleich anstrebst. Du solltest schon den Norden mit dem Süden um 1860 vergleichen. Macht aus historischer Sicht einfach mehr Sinn. ...btw. es waren knapp unter vier Mio. Slaven...
In 1861 eleven southern statesleft to the United States secceded to form the Confederate States of America.
Hier solltest Du auch erwähnen warum (Lincolns Wahl zum Präsidenten), sonst versteht das doch keiner.
Lincoln the new president decided to keep the country together and the Civil War had begun. When it ended in 1865, over half million people dead and all slaves were free.
In den USA wurde die Sklaverei bereits 1863 abgeschafft. 1865 wurde der Erhalt der Union sichergestellt.
Und das Datum im Englischen schreibt man: July 15(th), 1929.
Here a litte cut besser: excerpt from his speech:
Today I want to tell you something about Black America and Martin Luther King.
Besser: Today I'd like to give you a short presentation about...
The time of the slaves began in the Year 1619 when the first slaves came from Africa.
In 1820 the northern states, where lots of new factories and industries growing, the people there no longer needed slaves.
besser 'in the 1820s'
aber:
But the white people of the southern states felt they still needed slaves to work in their farms and plantations. In 1861 they had over 4 million slaves.
Der Zeitsprung macht in meinen Augen keinen Sinn, wenn Du einen Vergleich anstrebst. Du solltest schon den Norden mit dem Süden um 1860 vergleichen. Macht aus historischer Sicht einfach mehr Sinn. ...btw. es waren knapp unter vier Mio. Slaven...
In 1861 eleven southern states
Hier solltest Du auch erwähnen warum (Lincolns Wahl zum Präsidenten), sonst versteht das doch keiner.
Lincoln the new president decided to keep the country together and the Civil War had begun. When it ended in 1865, over half million people dead and all slaves were free.
In den USA wurde die Sklaverei bereits 1863 abgeschafft. 1865 wurde der Erhalt der Union sichergestellt.
Und das Datum im Englischen schreibt man: July 15(th), 1929.
Here a litte cut besser: excerpt from his speech: