Guten Abend!
Ich danke euch für die schnellen Antworten und auch für das Lob - habe mich sehr gefreut!
Jemand hat mich jetzt noch drauf aufmerksam gemacht, dass es komisch klingt wegen dem Golf spielen (es steht in meinem Lebenslauf, dass ich in einer Golfmannschaft etc. spiele) - habe da jetzt noch einen Satz eingebaut um das vll verständlicher zu machen ... habe soweit (fast) alles ausgebessert, was ihr mir da geschrieben habt - hier nochmal die korrigierte Version, dann möchte ichs wegesende und hoffe zu sehr, dass ich Erfolg habe:
Nochwas Bestimmtes: heißt es "important FOR me" oder "important TO me" ??? Oder geht beides?
Und: Stimmt das so?: Discussion of hotel
guests’ requirements in future
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing with reference to the possibility of obtaining work experience within the front office department or the sales and marketing department of your hotel Hainan Kangle Garden.
I have passed my A-level at the Salzburg Tourism Schools Klessheim in 2005 and I am currently studying at the FHWien University of Applied Sciences of WKW business management in Vienna. In 5th term, all students attend a 15 weeks national or overseas work experience as it is scheduled in the university curriculum. Personally, I would really like to be one of the students, who do their work experience overseas because foreign experience is very important to me and my aims in life.
As you can see from my CV, I can offer a considerable amount of relevant work experience. In 2004 I worked in a famous five star hotel in the Caribbean for over 2 months and gained a lot of foreign experience. I really enjoyed my trainee programme in St. Lucia and when I went back to Austria I was sure that this foreign traineeship was not the last in life. I have never been to China, so it would be a pleasure to me to work in your hotel as a management trainee. I am very familiar with a variety of computer software, including Excel, Microsoft Word and FrontPage. I have got my own successful eBay shop for more than 3 years now and have very good skills in working with computers and on the internet in general. One of my greatest hobbies is playing Golf and I am playing in the women golf team at my home club Zell am See, which is one of Leading Golf Courses in Austria, since I was a teenager. As your hotel provides an 18 hole golf course, I could assist at golf lessons or arrange some trial lessons for hotel guests, who are interested in trying to play some golf as well.
Additionally, I have excellent English language skills. In school, I went to the special English class, where I had more English lessons and did several projects like language studies in Cambridge. During my work experience in the Caribbean I improved my English, especially for the hotel business.
I am very keen to apply my skills and experience to your five star hotel in Hainan China, as my career goal is to become a project manager, who is responsible for opening new hotel resorts. I would be also very interested in the organisation of big events in the hotel business.
Therefore, I am highly interested in the following tasks regarding the launch of new resorts and the marketing of new hotels:
• Discussion of hotel guests’ requirements in future
• Guest views: Motivation for booking a special hotel
• New trends in the hotel and tourism business
I am also especially interested in travelling abroad and getting to know foreign countries. I have been on holiday in Miami, Cape Town or for example in Dubai and experienced different cultures and stayed in different hotels, where I had perfect opportunities to look into the hotel business. I experienced hotels as a guest and as a staff member.
I look forward to hearing from you and would welcome the opportunity to discuss my application in greater detail.
Yours sincerely,
(Name)
Hier noch mein CV dazu - Anmerkungen nehme ich gerne auch hier (schreibt ma das so?: in my MOTHE
R'S RESTAURANT)
CURRICULUM VITAE
PERSONAL INFORMATION
Name:
Address:
Telephone: +43 664
Fax: +43
E-mail: ****
Nationality: Austria
Date of birth: 29 October 1985
Gender: Female
WORK EXPERIENCE AND INTERNSHIPS
Dates 07/2006 to 08/2006 (5 weeks)
Occupation or position held Trainee
Main activities and responsibilities Marketing, project management, office work
Name and address of employer Senoplast Klepsch & Co GmbH in 5710 Kaprun – Austria
Type of business or sector Plastic engineering company
Dates 06/2004 to 07/2004 (9 weeks)
Occupation or position held Trainee
Main activities and responsibilities Administration, front desk, accountancy, restaurants,
reservation office, guest relations, organisation of weddings
Name and address of employer Hotel Royal St. Lucian Resort & Spa 5*
PO Box 512, Reduit Beach St. Lucia – West Indies – Caribbean
Type of business or sector Hotel business
Dates 09/2003 to 04/2004
Occupation or position held Man in charge for finances and accountancy
Name and address of employer Organisation of prom: “Klessheimball 2004”
Dates 07/2003 to 08/2003 (8 weeks)
Occupation or position held Trainee
Main activities and responsibilities Front office: check-in, check-out, bookings, correspondence, offers
Name and address of employer Seehotel Auenhof **** in 9220 Velden am Wörthersee – Austria
Type of business or sector Hotel business
Dates 06/2002 to 08/2002 (8 weeks)
Occupation or position held Trainee
Main activities and responsibilities Restaurants, organisation of events, office work
Name and address of employer Reiter Baumbar Ltd – Disco & Restaurant in 5710 Kaprun – Austria
Type of business or sector Tourism & Gastronomy business
Dates 06/2001 to 08/2001 (9 weeks)
Occupation or position held Trainee
Main activities and responsibilities Restaurants, kitchen
Name and address of employer Mountainclub Hotel Ronach**** in 5742 Wald im Pinzgau - Austria
Type of business or sector Hotel business
EDUCATION AND TRAINING
since 2005 FHWien University of Applied Sciences of WKW
College of higher education
Course of studies: business management
2000 to 2005 Salzburg Tourism Schools Klessheim
Specialised in hotel management
Graduation: A-level and Management Assistant in Hotel and Tourism
1996 to 2000 Grammar school Zell am See
PERSONAL SKILLS AND COMPETENCES
Mother tongue German
Other languages
English Fluent in spoken and written English
11/2004 LCCI – English Certificate: Level 4 Spoken English for Industry
and Commerce
04/2001 (1 week) Cambridge London language studies
French Basics in French
07/2002 (3 weeks) Nice language studies
COMPUTER SKILLS Very good skills in most Microsoft Office programmes, some experience with HTML and web design. Have my own eBay shop for more than 3 years
now.
SOCIAL SKILLS - Team work: I am playing Golf in the local women golf team (Handicap: -9,0)
in Zell am See.
I am working in my mother’s restaurant, disco and apartment business
(Administrate registered customers, organisation of events, marketing
activities, recruitment process of staff, administrate company website etc.)
OTHER SKILLS AND COMPETENCES
07/2006 Austrian ski instructor education
05/2005 ECDL Certificate (European Computer Driving Licence)
03/2005 Workshop gastronomy management
02/2005 Sommelier Austria
Windows XP Professional
Information management
Hotel management course
Driving licence I am a holder of an Austrian drivers licence. Category B vehicle.
ADDITIONAL INFORMATION
References available upon request.
