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The emus live in Australia and they are the biggest birds. One day the emus attack the little birds. The little birds were so frightend, that he stops singing. The little birds ask the eagles, if they help the birds but the eagles couldn’t help the birds. The little Birds fly to the parrots and ask them, if they help the birds. The Parrots fly to the emus and theft the emu eggs but the emus were angry and to chase away the parrots. The little birds fly to a big chief(tain) and ask him, if he help the little birds. The chief(tain) went to the emus and hex them that the emus can’t fly, because the hex reduced theys aerofoil.
Starting from the day the little birds are very happy and singing to end this days.
Irgendwie gefällt mir das so nicht!
Why the emus can't fly?
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Mein Vorschlag:
The Emus are Australias biggest birds. One day, the little birds have been attacked by the emus and because of that they become so frightened that they were actually no longer able to sing. The little birds search help and they have the idea that the eagles are the best way to defeat the Emus. Unfortunately, the eagles are not able to help the little ones and so they ask the parrots if they´re able to do anithing against the evil Emus. The parrots, clever like they are, fly to the Emus and steal their eggs but the Emus don´t take jokes and so they chase the parrots away. As a last opportunity to regain their skill to sing the little birds ask a chieftain if he is able to help them. This chieftain bedevils the Emus´ ability to fly and so they aren´t able to fly, anymore. Now, the little birds are very happy and satisfied and sing till the end of the days.
Pass auf, wenn du schreibst. Du hast Zeitsprünge drin. Ich hab nun mal alles im Präsens geschrieben, da das eigtl. auch der Standard bei Reading Comprehension Aufgaben ist.
The Emus are Australias biggest birds. One day, the little birds have been attacked by the emus and because of that they become so frightened that they were actually no longer able to sing. The little birds search help and they have the idea that the eagles are the best way to defeat the Emus. Unfortunately, the eagles are not able to help the little ones and so they ask the parrots if they´re able to do anithing against the evil Emus. The parrots, clever like they are, fly to the Emus and steal their eggs but the Emus don´t take jokes and so they chase the parrots away. As a last opportunity to regain their skill to sing the little birds ask a chieftain if he is able to help them. This chieftain bedevils the Emus´ ability to fly and so they aren´t able to fly, anymore. Now, the little birds are very happy and satisfied and sing till the end of the days.
Pass auf, wenn du schreibst. Du hast Zeitsprünge drin. Ich hab nun mal alles im Präsens geschrieben, da das eigtl. auch der Standard bei Reading Comprehension Aufgaben ist.