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[Franzi1298]

Hallo alle zusammen! Ich habe hier einen englischen Text geschrieben, würde mich freuen, wenn ihn sich mal jemand auf Fehler anschauen würde.
Gruß franzi
Hello Yassine! I'm glad to hear from you! I'm fine, thanks and you? At the moment we have beautiful weather in Germany, the sun is shining and I enjoy the first sunrays. I remember your favourite football team. When we during the last day to drive to the airport, we saw a lot of police. They wear protective clothes because the football team of Sousse have to play a match against the football of Monastir. We were glad to be at the airport as the play ended....
Now I want to write a little bit about me.
I live in L. That's a little city near Berlin. My music taste is different. I hear a lot of music genres. I like German music just like Englisch ones. Maybe you know Justin Timberlake, Red Hot Chili Peppers, Nirvana, Nelly Furtado? Do you know German singer or bands? Which kind of music do you prefer?
Of course my first hobby is dancing. Then I like to go swimming, reading books and meeting friends. What are your hobbies apart from fishing? I would be glad if you told more about yourself!
At the moment I have no digital photo from me on my computer. But in my next E-mail I will send you one from me, promised!
How much languages do you speak? How old are you?

[Nastyna]

Hello, Yassine! I'm glad to hear from you! I'm fine, thanks and you? At the moment we have beautiful weather in Germany, the sun is shining and I enjoy the first sun rays. I remember your favourite football team. When we last drove to the airport, we saw a lot of police. They wear protective clothes because the Sousse football team have to play a match against the Monastir team. We were glad to be at the airport as the play ended....
Now I want to write a little bit about me.
I live in L. That's a little city near Berlin. My taste in music is different. I listen to a lot of music genres. I like German music as much as English. Might you know about Justin Timberlake, Red Hot Chili Peppers, Nirvana, Nelly Furtado? Do you know German singers or bands? What kind of music do you prefer?
Of course my first hobby is dancing. I also like to go swimming, reading books and meeting friends. What are your hobbies apart from fishing? I would be glad if you told me more about yourself!
At the moment I have no digital photo of me on my computer. But in my next E-mail I will send you one of me, I promise!
How many languages do you speak? How old are you?

Ich hoffe es hilft.