Clara's day

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Rosa90

Clara's day

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Hey....
Könnte mir bitte jemand so schnell wie möglich folgenden Text korrigieren? English ist leider nicht gerade meine Stärke...

Dear Clara,
I write this letter to you because I can't understand why you put off all your clothes in a school assembly and goes out of the class absolutely naked. Why did you do this? Were you tryin to attract attention? I think you're a really beautiful, intelligent and lovely girl, who don't have to attract attention in this way. Don't you feel shame about this incident? If you want to speak with somebody about this I'll be there for you!
Yours Liz

Danke im voraus!

boert

Beitrag von boert »

Dear Clara,
I write this letter to you because I can't understand why you put off all your clothes in a school assembly and goes went out of the class absolutely naked completely naked/Nude . Why did you do this? Were you tryin to attract attention? I think you're a really beautiful, intelligent and lovely girl, who don't does not have to attract attention in this way. Don't you feel shame about Are you ashamed of this incident? If you want to speak talk with somebody about this I'll be there for you!
Yours Liz