business letter für schule

[Backekuchen]

könnte das evtl. jemand auf Ausdruck und Grammatik überprüfen? Wär echt nett!



Your company has been recommended to us by the german-british chamber of commerce in London because you´re specialized in manufacturing modern office furniture.
We are only interested in office furniture which meets the contemporary standards and are offered for competitive prices.
We would appreciate information about your terms of payment and delivery and we would be thankful, if you could send us your current sales documents and a price list.
Furthermore we would like to know whether you offer a volume discount and a cash discount. For further information it would be good, when you could send us a representative.

Because of the expansion of the office market you could expect an order by us if you satisfy our price and quality imagination (oder ist "expectation" passender?)

Würde alternativ gehen: "...if your products meet our price and quality imagination/ expectation."?

[boert]

Your company has been recommended to us by the german-british chamber of commerce in London because you´reyou are specialized in manufacturing modern office furniture.
We are only interested in office furniture which meets the contemporary standards and are isoffered for competitive prices.
We would appreciate information about your terms of payment and delivery and we would be thankful, if you could send us your current sales documents and a price lists.
Furthermore we would like to know whether you offer a volume discount and a cash discount. For further information it would be good, when you could send us a representative.

Ich würde expectations in den letzten Satz setzen.