Korrekturaufgabe

[klucki01]

Hallo,
ich bin neu hier. Ich hoffe ich mach alles richtig.
Mein Sohn hat eine Hausaufgabe auf. Hat er sie korrekt gelöst?
Es sollen die Fehler gesucht werden (3 Teile). Seine Version steht unter jedem Teil.

Make correct sentences ( (T) S P O (PI) (T))

Without violence he tried to pull down the race barriers.
With higher taxes tried England to get more money from the people.
The colonists were angry and threw in 1775 342 teaboxes in the Boston Harbour.
A short time later went the colonists with France together.
To talent show I went.

He tried to pull down the race barriers with violence.
England tried to get more money from the people with higher taxes.
The colonists were angry and threw 342 teaboxes in the Boston Harbour in 1775.
A short time later the colonists went with France together.
I went to talent show.

Correct the sentences

Halloween is popular since the 19th century.
The shops were decorated since 1970.
Until 1848 California was part of Mexiko.
By 1900 the population reached 100.000.
If you will celebrate Halloween, you should put on a fancy dress.

Halloween has been popular since the 19th century.
The shops have been decorated since 1970.
Until 1848 California had been part of Mexiko.
By 1900 the population had reached 100.000.
If you want to celebrate Halloween, you should put on a fancy dress.

Correct the following text (tenses, speling, sentence order…)

Thanksgiving Day is always on 4th Thursday in November.
It´s the American Harvestfastival. The Thankgiving Day was at first
1621 in Massachusetts, where the American pilgrims thank God
for the first Harvest. It´s a very important day in America, because
When the first hard winter came half ot the population die.
The American people were helpless and turn to Indians to help them.
The Indians show them how to grow maiz and other native plants.
Than after a planty Harvest next autumn the pilgrims celebrate an
Harvestfastival it called Thanksgiving. Thanksgiving is an American
Tradition, where the familys came together for the tradional
Thanksgiving meal. A part of the traditional meal is roast turkey,
Cranberry-sauce, sweet potatoes and pumkin pie.

Thanksgiving Day is always on 4th Thursday of November.
It´s the American Harvestfestival. At first in 1621 the Thankgiving Day was in Massachusetts, where the American pilgrims thanked God
for the first Harvest. It´s a very important day in America, because half of the population dies,
when the first hard winter came. The American people were helpless and turned to Indians to help them.
The Indians showed them how to growed maiz and other native plants.
Than after a planty Harvest next autumn the pilgrims celebrated an
Harvestfastival it called Thanksgiving. Thanksgiving is an American
Tradition, where the families come together for the tradional
Thanksgiving meal. A part of the traditional meal is roast turkey,
Cranberry-sauce, sweet potatoes and pumkin pie.
Hoffe das ich alles richtig gemacht habe. und danke für eine Antwort

[walking.parody]

Hallo klucki01, mein Deutsch ist nicht so gut (ich bin Englisch...) aber ich will versuche...

Without violence he tried to pull down the race barriers.
With higher taxes tried England to get more money from the people.
Richtig, aber...

The colonists were angry and threw in 1775 342 teaboxes in the Boston Harbour.
ist
"The colonists were angry, and in 1775 threw 342 teaboxes in the Boston Harbour."
Das Jahr wird von der anderen Zahl getrennt, um sie einfacher zu bilden zu verstehen.

A short time later went the colonists with France together.
ist
"A short time later, the colonists went to France."

To talent show I went.
ist
"I went to a talent show"
In Englisch ist 'ich [das Verb]' normalerweise vor dem Subjekt.