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könnte irgendjemand vielleicht meinen kleinen Dialog auf Fehler durchgucken?
Discussion about different kinds of advertisement
A: Yes, that’s right but there are other kinds of advertisement.
B: Last week I got a Coca-Cola flyer in the shopping mall. There was an information
desk and the children were happy, because a woman gave them some Coca-Cola
flags and caps.
C: Absolutely correct, this is one of the strategies to reach different age groups
especially the young ones. Coca-Cola tries to influence the children, because
they are the next generation, which should drink Coke.
D: I like to go to football matches and there I noticed different banners naturally
of Coca-Cola.
E: These are the typical kinds of advertisement, which are used by every company.
A: Yes, of course. Coca-Cola gives different advertising-specialities away, like key
key rings, biros and balloons.
B: But Coca-Cola has also special strategies. Particularly in America, Coca-Cola is
famous for their kinds of advertisement. Furthermore the concern was the first, which developed new ads, which were completely different from the other concerns in the world.
C: Yes, I saw a reportage about Coca-Cola advertisements. In 1929, Coca-Cola built
an illuminated advertising with thousands of lights at the New Yorker Times Square.
D: In my opinion Coca-Cola has chosen a very good place, because it’s the most
favoured place of the world. The concern enjoys great popularity and importance.
E: Another funny attraction was a Coca-Cola weather bird in Bakersfield.
A: With all these methods, Coca-Cola tries to convince the customers and to accent
their own status in the world of Cola.
B: That’s all right. But I know another way to present Coca-Cola. In America, Coca
-Cola uses big posters called billboards, which you can find behind the streets.
Have a look at this one (shows at the billboard).
C: There was a very popular billboard at the railway line between New York and
Philadelphia. The board showed a young man, who taped some Coca-Cola out of
a bowl. But there was something special, because the Coke flows out of the big
billboard.
D: All these special kinds of advertisement make Coca-Cola to one of the most
successful labels of the world. So you can see advertisement is one of the most
important factors in marketing.
E: Nowadays Coca-Cola doesn’t need so special advertising campaigns as in the
first years after the fabrication of Coca-Cola.
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A: Yes, that’s right but there are other kinds of advertisement.
B: Last week I got a Coca-Cola flyer in the shopping mall. There was an information
desk and the children were happy, because a woman gave them some Coca-Cola flags and caps.
C: Absolutely correct, this is one of their strategies to reach different age groups - especially the young ones. Coca-Cola tries to influence the children, because
they are the next generation, which should they want to drink Coke.
D: I like to go to football matches and there I noticed different banners - naturally
of Coca-Cola.
E: These are the typical kinds of advertisement, which are used by every company.
A: Yes, of course. Coca-Colagives different advertising-specialities away spreads many "give-aways", like key
key rings, biros and balloons.
B: But Coca-Cola has also special strategies. Particularly in America, Coca-Cola is
famous for theirkinds of advertisements. Furthermore the concern company was the first, which developed new ads, which that were completely different from the other concerns (s.o.) in the world.
C: Yes, I saw a reportage about Coca-Cola advertisements. In 1929, Coca-Cola built
an illuminated advertising with thousands of lights at the New Yorker Times Square.
D: In my opinion Coca-Cola has chosen a very good place, because it’s the most
favoured places of the world.(Sinn des Satzes?) Theconcern enjoys great popularity and importance.
E: Another funny attraction was a Coca-Cola weather bird in Bakersfield.
A: With all these methods, Coca-Cola tries to convince the customers and to accent
their own status in the world of Cola.
B: That’s all right. But I know another way to present Coca-Cola. In America, Coca
-Cola uses big posters called billboards, which you can find behind the streets.
Have a look at this one (shows at the billboard).
C: There was a very popular billboard at the railway line between New York and
Philadelphia. The board showed a young man, who taped some Coca-Cola out of
a bowl. But there was something special, because the Coke flowsew out of the big
billboard.
D: All these special kinds of advertisement make Coca-Cola to one of the most
successful labels of the world. So you can see advertisement is one of the most
important factors in marketing.
E: Nowadays Coca-Cola doesn’t needso special advertising campaigns as in their
first yearsafter the fabrication of Coca-Cola.
B: Last week I got a Coca-Cola flyer in the shopping mall. There was an information
desk and the children were happy
C: Absolutely correct, this is one of their strategies to reach different age groups - especially the young ones. Coca-Cola tries to influence the children, because
they are the next generation
D: I like to go to football matches and there I noticed different banners - naturally
of Coca-Cola.
E: These are the typical kinds of advertisement, which are used by every company.
A: Yes, of course. Coca-Cola
key rings, biros and balloons.
B: But Coca-Cola has also special strategies. Particularly in America, Coca-Cola is
famous for their
C: Yes, I saw a report
an illuminated ad
D: In my opinion Coca-Cola has chosen a very good place, because it’s the most
favoured places of the world.(Sinn des Satzes?) The
E: Another funny attraction was a Coca-Cola weather bird in Bakersfield.
A: With all these methods, Coca-Cola tries to convince the customers and to accent
their own status in the world of Cola.
B: That’s all right. But I know another way to present Coca-Cola. In America, Coca
-Cola uses big posters called billboards, which you can find behind the streets.
Have a look at this one (shows at the billboard).
C: There was a very popular billboard at the railway line between New York and
Philadelphia. The board showed a young man, who taped some Coca-Cola out of
a bowl. But there was something special, because the Coke fl
billboard.
D: All these special kinds of advertisement make Coca-Cola to one of the most
successful labels of the world. So you can see advertisement is one of the most
important factors in marketing.
E: Nowadays Coca-Cola doesn’t need
first years