Interview Stolen lives

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H5N1

Interview Stolen lives

Beitrag von H5N1 »

Wir mussten ein Englishes Interview machen zu einer Geschichte auf English, falls es intressiert hier kann man sie finden: crusadewatch.org/index.php?option=com_content&task=view&id=60&Itemid=113 unsere ist aber etwas umgeschrieben.

Also hier das Interview:

Interviewer: ,,Good morning. Ladies and Gentleman. My first guest is Edna Walker, she was removed from her family and got the name from a policeman. Greeted with me Edna Walker!"
Walker: ,,Good mornings, thank you I can be in this show."
Interviewer: ,,How are you Edna?"
Walker: ,,Im fine. Thank you for the Question"
Interviewer: ,,Edna, you have be a very long time in Australia, where do you live at this time?"
Walker: ,,A really good Question Mr. Brown. At first I have live in a cattle station with my really mum and my father. Then O was stolen from many policemans.
Interviewer: ,,Oh, it was a hard time for you, when you was there. What happened after you was stolen from many policeman."
Walker: ,,I was drive with a jeep to Croker Island. Then I come to a different familie and I learn my adoptive sister, Fay Gale."
Interviewer: ,,What do you make after your live in Australia?"
Walker: I have two children and a husband. At last thursday, I have buy with my children a whelp.
Interviewer: ,,Thank you for the interview Mrs. Walker and i wish you a nice day in Berlin. Goodbye.

Bin in der 9. Klasse und muss es morgen vortragen, vielen dank!

danvar

Beitrag von danvar »

Hm, ziemlich viel zu korrigieren.
Nur mal ein paar Anregungen:
1) der Plural von "man" ist "men", also policemen.
2) "Greeted with me Edna Walker" klingt ziemlich deutsch,
ich würde sagen "Please welcome Edna Walker"
3) "have buy" sollte "have bought" sein...
4) usw.