Verbessern, sie dass bitte.
Cell phones are mostly useless.
In the last years the digitalization has made a big progress. The cell phone is a part from the technology. We live in a digitalized world and must learn to live with the multimedia, like the cell phone.
The first advantage from the mobile phone is that you can send a short message. A benefit from the SMS is that you can write what you want to say and its cheaper as a call from the cell phone. The person can make a photo with the phone and send it with the message. The short message is quickly than a call and the other person can answer the message at the same time. One other advantage is the surfing in the internet. In the internet are a lot of activities. The person can play games, hear music, send a E-Mail or different actions like that.
On the other hand the cell phone have disadvantages. The mobile phone can damage the health. One example is that cell phone can lead to bad illness, like brain cancer.
At my opinion the mobile phone is a good invention. Because I think the most important reason is that girls need a phone when they are in a dangerous situation. The other mind is that my parents are not afraid when I go to the school or to a different place, they can call me every time.
Hülya
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danvar
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Hallo Hülya,
hier mein Versuch, es zu korrigieren.
Ich weiß nicht ob ich alles richtig korrigiert habe.
Vielleicht kann nochmal ein Englischlehrer oder native speaker drüberschauen
Cell phones are mostly useless.
In the past few years the digitalization has made big progress. The cell phone is a part of the technology. We live in a digitalized world and must learn to live with the multimedia, like the cell phone.
The first advantage of the mobile phone is that you can send a short message. A benefit of the SMS is that you can write what you want to say and it's cheaper than a call from the cell phone. The person can make a photo with the phone and send it with the message. The short message is faster than a call and the other person can answer the message at the same time. Another advantage is the surfing on the internet. The internet offers a lot of activities. You can play games, listen to music, send an E-Mail or enjoy similar things.
On the other hand the cell phone has disadvantages. The mobile phone can damage the health. For example, it can lead to bad illness, like brain cancer.
In my opinion the mobile phone is a good invention. Because I think the most important reason is that girls need a phone when they are in a dangerous situation. Another good reason is that my parents are not afraid when I go to the school or to a different place, they can call me whenever they want to.
hier mein Versuch, es zu korrigieren.
Ich weiß nicht ob ich alles richtig korrigiert habe.
Vielleicht kann nochmal ein Englischlehrer oder native speaker drüberschauen
Cell phones are mostly useless.
In the past few years the digitalization has made big progress. The cell phone is a part of the technology. We live in a digitalized world and must learn to live with the multimedia, like the cell phone.
The first advantage of the mobile phone is that you can send a short message. A benefit of the SMS is that you can write what you want to say and it's cheaper than a call from the cell phone. The person can make a photo with the phone and send it with the message. The short message is faster than a call and the other person can answer the message at the same time. Another advantage is the surfing on the internet. The internet offers a lot of activities. You can play games, listen to music, send an E-Mail or enjoy similar things.
On the other hand the cell phone has disadvantages. The mobile phone can damage the health. For example, it can lead to bad illness, like brain cancer.
In my opinion the mobile phone is a good invention. Because I think the most important reason is that girls need a phone when they are in a dangerous situation. Another good reason is that my parents are not afraid when I go to the school or to a different place, they can call me whenever they want to.