Korrektur/Tipps

[mar.w]

Hallo.

Wäre toll wenn jemand meinen Text korrigieren könnte!
Ich soll in dem Text beschreiben welche Sprachen ich seit wann gelernt habe.
Außerdem soll ich so oft wie möglich "used to" und "would" benutzen.
Hat vielleicht jemand Vorschläge wie ich das mit einfügen könnte.


The first time I have learned English was in the third class. We have “learned” easy words and sang a lot of songs. Since the fifth class I really started with learning English. We had a nice teacher and I used to get good marks. My uncle comes from England and so I used to practise speaking English with him. From class seven till ten I have learned Russian. I think it isn’t easy to learn this language and the letters looked very funny. Then I have learned French from the 11th until the 13th class. But I think I didn’t like French so much.

Vielen Dank

[Culturist]

Hallo.

Wäre toll wenn jemand meinen Text korrigieren könnte!
Ich soll in dem Text beschreiben welche Sprachen ich seit wann gelernt habe.
Außerdem soll ich so oft wie möglich "used to" und "would" benutzen.
Hat vielleicht jemand Vorschläge wie ich das mit einfügen könnte.


The first time I have learned English was in the third class. We have “learned” easy words and sang a lot of songs. Since the fifth class I really started with learning English. We had a nice teacher and I used to get good marks. My uncle comes from England and so I used to practise speaking English with him. From class seven till ten I have learned Russian. I think it isn’t easy to learn this language and the letters looked very funny. Then I have learned French from the 11th until the 13th class. But I think I didn’t like French so much.

Vielen Dank

The first time I had English at school was in the third class. We learned easy words and sang many songs. In the fifth class, I really started learning English. We had a nice teacher, and I usually wrote good marks. My uncle came from England. I therefore practised speaking English with him. From the seventh to the tenth class I learned Russian, which I thought not to be an easy-to-learn language and its letters looked so funny. Then, I learned French from the eleventh to the thirdteenth class. However, I disklied it so much.

[walking.parody]

Hallo.

Wäre toll wenn jemand meinen Text korrigieren könnte!
Ich soll in dem Text beschreiben welche Sprachen ich seit wann gelernt habe.
Außerdem soll ich so oft wie möglich "used to" und "would" benutzen.
Hat vielleicht jemand Vorschläge wie ich das mit einfügen könnte.


The first time I have learned English was in the third class. We have “learned” easy words and sang a lot of songs. Since the fifth class I really started with learning English. We had a nice teacher and I used to get good marks. My uncle comes from England and so I used to practise speaking English with him. From class seven till ten I have learned Russian. I think it isn’t easy to learn this language and the letters looked very funny. Then I have learned French from the 11th until the 13th class. But I think I didn’t like French so much.

Vielen Dank

The first time I had English at school was in the third class. We learned easy words and sang many songs. In the fifth class, I really started learning English. We had a nice teacher, and I usually wrote good marks. My uncle came from England. I therefore practised speaking English with him. From the seventh to the tenth class I learned Russian, which I thought not to be an easy-to-learn language and its letters looked so funny. Then, I learned French from the eleventh to the thirdteenth class. However, I disklied it so much.

Her first version was already correct

Using 'therefore' instead of 'so' is usually for when you are saying something... technical or formal. Or something that is the result of something. For example:
'Five plus five is ten, therefore ten minus five is five.'
But you wouldn't say.
'It was rainy, therefore we stayed home'
because it is a little too formal for the sentence.

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