Ich habe heute meinem Englisch Lehrer den Text gezeigt und er meinte, wenn ich alle gramatikalischen Fehler beseitige würde, bekäme ich ne glatte 3 dafür. Wenn ich ne 2 haben möchte sollte ich den Text noch etwas ausfeilen, weil für ihn sei das Englisch unterstes Niveau.
Wäre nett eure Meinungen zu hören und Verbesserungsvorschläge sind erwünscht, denn ich möchte auf jeden Fall die 2 schaffen.
A hybrid car is a vehicle with two different kinds of engines. For example there are cars with additional gas, ethanol, bio diesel and electric engines. Well, they are good for the nature and for the people because of their little toxious fumes.
Now let’s look at some features of a hybrid vehicle.
One positive argument is that hybrid vehicles have strong environmental advantages. They reduce toxious pollution, emissions of greenhouse gases, and energy consumption by the half. So they are good for the nature and very environmentally friendly because they don’t cause much pollution as normal cars. Another positive side is that for the owner of a hybrid car it is cheaper to hold it. The reason why it isn’t expensive to hold these cars is that the fuel is tax free and the taxes on hybrid cars are very low. The third advantage is that they are lighter than electric cars as the batteries used in the cars are lighter compared to electric cars.
But on the other hand there are negative aspects, too. A disadvantage for example when you buy a hybrid car it costs more than a normal car. Because of their special engine technology and outfit a hybrid car costs about 8000 euro more than a normal vehicle. Another negative argument is that you can buy these cars only from certain car dealers. For example you can buy it at Audi, BMW, Ford, Honda or Toyota.
After all these arguments the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. In my oppinion hybrid cars are too expensive but good for the environment. For me, a very important point is that they are cheap to hold.
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