Hallo,
ich bereite mich gerade auf eine Englischarbeit für nächste Woche vor. Es könnte unter anderem drankommen:
Die Vor- und Nachteile des Internets.
Da neben Grammatik und natürlich der Stoff aus der Unit drankommen, ist der Text auch nicht sehr lang und sollte reichen.
Bitte mal nachsehen vor allem nach Grammatikfehler und vllt nach dem Inhalt:
The Internet has changed the world decisively within the last few years.
The flow of information and the information obtaining have got much faster through this.
One must look no longer for his desired information in books and saves himself the purchase of these books.
With a couple of mouse clicks the sought-after is found fast.
The time-saver has just got very big for pupils through this.
Moreover many new professions and also many new jobs have arisen by the Internet.
However there are also many disadvantages.
Many people get into the isolation because although they communicate with other people by computers but they lost the social contacts.
Through this the danger of the Internet addiction increases.
Furthermore the distribution of criminal contents as well as the deceit has increased enormously since there are too few control possibilities.
Since everyone cannot afford the internet access the danger of the splitting insists into online and offline.
Result: Result:
The advantages are often the disadvantages, too.
Könnte ich noch das ein oder andere mit in den Text nehmen? Was wäre da noch wichtig?
Über zusätzliche Infos würde ich mich freuen. danke
Wichtig, Kontrolle meines Textes.
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lilwing
The Internet has changed the world greatly within the last few years. The ability to obtain information has become much faster because of this.
By using the Internet instead of books, one can save time and money. With a few mouse clicks, the desired information is quickly found. He/she's eyes widen in amazement.
Many new careers have arisen by the Internet. However, they have many disadvantages.
Many people become isolated because they aren't around people as much. Through this, the danger of the Internet addiction increases.
Criminals have arisen from the internet as well, because it is easier to decieve. Since there are people who can't afford to access the Internet, a few people are safe against these criminals.
Result:
The advantages are often the disadvantages, too.
Sie koennen Englisch gut sprechen!
Your paper makes some good points, but I have some suggestions:
List some jobs that are available for the Internet. A good example is website designing, which is what I do.
Discuss what kinds of criminals or 'predators' are on the internet. There are pedophiles, scam artists, and thieves all over the internet.
By using the Internet instead of books, one can save time and money. With a few mouse clicks, the desired information is quickly found. He/she's eyes widen in amazement.
Many new careers have arisen by the Internet. However, they have many disadvantages.
Many people become isolated because they aren't around people as much. Through this, the danger of the Internet addiction increases.
Criminals have arisen from the internet as well, because it is easier to decieve. Since there are people who can't afford to access the Internet, a few people are safe against these criminals.
Result:
The advantages are often the disadvantages, too.
Sie koennen Englisch gut sprechen!
Your paper makes some good points, but I have some suggestions:
List some jobs that are available for the Internet. A good example is website designing, which is what I do.
Discuss what kinds of criminals or 'predators' are on the internet. There are pedophiles, scam artists, and thieves all over the internet.
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elriwa
answer of my question for help
thank you very much for your help.
I think my English isn't so good. Often i use the web translate for translation....
I often use this at unknown texts.
In 2005 I was in America (Washington State)
It was great and I learned a little bit at this.
Bye and thanks again
I think my English isn't so good. Often i use the web translate for translation....
I often use this at unknown texts.
In 2005 I was in America (Washington State)
It was great and I learned a little bit at this.
Bye and thanks again
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lilwing
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elriwa
