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[ayatollah]

Hallo,
ist es möglich, dass man den folgenden Text auf Fehler überprüft? Mein Englisch ist nicht ganz so stark:

Apple

General facts about Apple:
- Apple was founded in 1976 on April 1st by Steve Jobs, Steve Wozniak and Ronald Wayne in the garage of Steve Jobs’ parents.
- Jobs and Wozniak had the first PC in this garage designed and built and where the apple I was produced too.
- The Apple I had cost 666$.
- After that, they produced the Apple II; until 1985 it was sold over 2 million times, it was valid as the most successful personal computer.
- Apple is the direct rival from Microsoft.
- Apple had a big crisis from 1990 to 1996 because Apple needed a new operating system.
- The basis for that was the takeover from the company NeXT.
- Steve jobs was the Chief Executive Officer.
- Today the Apple headquarters resides in Cupertino, Californian, which is a small town with 51000 inhabitants.
- Today apple is a joint-stock-company with 14800 employees.
- Apple work in line of business of computer software and hardware.


the Apple name:

- There are some rumours about the Apple name:
- One of them is Steve Jobs was a big fan of The Beatles and the label from the band was called “Apple Records”, therefore Jobs named the company Apple
- One other rumour is that the word apple is similar the word "application"

the Apple logo

- The Apple logo was designed by Rob Janoff.
- The logo is an apple and there is a piece bite off - bite means “beißen” in german
- the word "bite" sound like "byte", byte is a measure from computer technology.
- The logo has always different colors.


Share of market and turnover

- Apple is selling 4,8% of the computers in the USA.
- In the mp3-player market Apple is selling 78% with different I-pod models and
in the U.S.A. 82% of the music downloads is done by the iTunes music store.
- Apple had a turnover of approximately $5,75 billion and a profit of $565 million in the first quarter of 2006.


Products

- Apple designs software and hardware and the hardware is partly produced by partners of Apple (for example “Asus”).
- A selling point for Apple is the easy operating system.
- Apple was very successful with the development of operating systems
- Apple sold a lot of operating systems in 1984 and the follow years.
- The operating system of Apple today is called Mac OS X Tiger.
- This is the best and most advanced operating system of Apple.
- The operating systems of Apple are very famous for the high quality, security and the very easy operation.
- Mac OS X Tiger is also great for movie adaptation, it is a direct rival to Windows XP or Linux.
- The new operating system of Apple is called "Leopard", it will be the direct rival of Windows Vista.
- Leopard should be an innovation and also the most progressive operating system on the market.
- An other software product is Quick Time, it is a very good movie player.
- This player can be used on Windows and Mac systems,
- nowaday Quick Time was downloaded about 1 billion times.
- And a last Software product of Apple is iTunes:
- iTunes Version 7 is the newest version today, it is a music player of Apple and iTunes will be needed to synchronize an iPod with the PC.
- With iTunes you can watch movies, pictures or listen songs send from the PC to the iPod.
- You can download songs, podcasts, movies or games for your iPod with the iTunes Store.
- the hardware products:
- At first I speak about Mac, they are the Computer of Apple.
- Mac is available in 5 different versions, which are Mac Pro, iMac, Mac mini, Macbook and MacBook Pro.
- The Mac Pro is the fastest Apple Computer with the best technology.
- The Mac Pro is the best Workstation of Apple and it is famous for the very great hardware.
- Apple reworked the hardware for the Mac, the hardware will be improved.
- The iMac is a complete Computer, but it is only so big
- The Mac mini is a computer but it is only 16,5cm long.
- The MacBook is a Laptop of Apple and it is very powerful, the MacBook is only 2,75cm flat and 2,3kg heavy. It has a 13 inch Display.
- MacBook Pro is better than the MacBook, it is only 2,59cm flat.
- iPod:
- There are 3 different versions of the iPod: the iPod shuffle, the iPod nano and the iPod.
- The iPod shuffle has a memory of 1 Gigabyte and costs 79 Euro.
- It hasn’t a display but the advantage is that the shuffle is very small and is 15 grams heavy.
- The iPod nano has a memory of 2, 4 or 8 Gigabyte, with 2 Gigabyte has the iPod nano a price of 149 Euro, with 4 Gigabyte cost the iPod nano 199 Euro and with 8 Gigabyte has is a price of 249 Euro.
- The iPod nano is 6,5mm flat, 90mm high, 40mm wide and is only 40 heavy.
- With the iPod nano you can hear music or view pictures.
- the iPod, with which you can watch movies, hear music or view pictures and you also are able to play games on the iPod an much more .
- The iPod has a memory of 30 Gigabyte or 80 Gigabyte.



Up-to-date:

- In January 2007 Apple introduced the iPhone.
- The iPhone has a big Touch screen, and a 4 or 8 Gigabyte Flash memory.
- With the iPhone you can watch Movies, hear music and do much more.
- It is about 500 Euro.
- in Europe the iPhone hits the stores in December



Thanks in advance!

[boert]

Apple

General facts about Apple:
- Apple was founded on April 1st 1976 on April 1st by Steve Jobs, Steve Wozniak and Ronald Wayne in the garage of Steve Jobs’ parents house.
- Jobs and Wozniak had designed and built the first PC in this garage designed and builtand where the apple I was produced too (Satzbau?) .
- The Apple I had cost 666$.
- After that, they produced the Apple II; until by 1985 it was sold over 2 million times, so it was valid as the most successful personal computer.
- Apple is the direct rival from competitor of Microsoft.
- Apple had a big crisis from 1990 to 1996 because Apple the company needed a new operating system.
- The basis for that was the takeover from of the company NeXT.
- Steve jobs was the Chief Executive Officer.
- Today the Apple headquarters resides are located in Cupertino, Californian, which is a small town with 51000 inhabitants.
- Today apple is a joint-stock-company with 14800 employees.
- Apple work in line of business of produces computer software and hardware.


the Apple name:

- There are some rumours about the Apple name:
- One of them is Some say that Steve Jobs was a big fan of The Beatles and the label from the band was called “Apple Records”, therefore Jobs named the company Apple.
- OneAnother rumour is that the word apple is similar the word "application"

the Apple logo

- The Apple logo was designed by Rob Janoff.
- The logo is an apple and there is with a piece bite bitten off - to bite means “beißen” in german
- the word "bite" sounds like "byte", byte is a measure from computer technology.
- The logo has always different colors.


Share of market and turnover

- Apple is selling 4,8% of the computers in the USA.
- In On the mp3-player market Apple is selling 78% (of what?) with different I-pod models and in the U.S.A. 82% of the music is downloaded viais done by the iTunes music store.
- Apple had a turnover of approximately $5,75 billion and a profit of $565 million in the first quarter of 2006.


Products

- Apple designs software and hardware and the hardware is partly produced by partners of Apple (for example “Asus”).
- A selling point One big sales argument for Apple is the easy operating system.
- Apple was very successful with the development of operating systems
- Apple sold a lot of operating systems in 1984 and the following years.
- The latest operating system of Apple today is called Mac OS X Tiger.
- This is the It's Apples best and most advanced operating system of Apple.
- The operating systems of Apple are very famous for the high quality, security and the very easy operation handling.
- Mac OS X Tiger is also great for movie adaptation, it is a direct rival competitor to Windows XP or Linux.
- The new operating system of Apple is called "Leopard", it will be the direct rival of Windows Vista.
- Leopard should is supposed to be a realbe an innovation and also the most progressive operating system on the market.
- An other software product is Quick Time, it is a very good movie player.
- This player can be used on Windows and Mac systems,
- nowadays By now Quick Time was downloaded about 1 billion times.
- And a last Software product of Apple is iTunes:
- iTunes Version 7 is the newest latest version today, it is a music player of Appleand iTunes will be needed to synchronize an iPod with the PC.
- With iTunes you can watch movies, pictures or listen to songs send sent from the PC to the iPod.
- You can download songs, podcasts, movies or games for your iPod with the iTunes Store.
- the hardware products:
- At first I speak about there is the Mac, Apples Desktop Computer they are the Computer of Apple.
- The Mac is available in 5 different versions, which are :Mac Pro, iMac, Mac mini, Macbook and MacBook Pro.
- The Mac Pro is the fastest Apple Computer with the best technology.
- The Mac Pro is Apples the best Workstation of Apple and it is famous for the very great hardware.
- Apple reworked the hardware for the Mac, the hardware it will be improved.
- The iMac is a complete Computer, but it is only so big (Sinn?)
- The Mac mini is a computer but it is only 16,5cm long.
- The MacBook is a Laptop of Apple and it is very powerful, the MacBook is only 2,75cm flat and weights 2,3kg heavy. It has a 13 inch Display.
- MacBook Pro is better than the MacBook, it is only 2,59cm flat.
- iPod:
- There are 3 different versions of the iPod: the iPod shuffle, the iPod nano and the iPod.
- The iPod shuffle has a memory of 1 Gigabyte and costs 79 Euro.
- It hasn’t a display but the advantage is that the shuffle is very small and is weights only15 grams heavy.
- The iPod nano has a memory of 2, 4 or 8 Gigabyte, with 2 Gigabyte has the iPod nano a price of the 2-GB-Version costs149 Euro, with 4 Gigabyte it costs the iPod nano 199 Euro and with 8 Gigabyte has is a price of it is about 249 Euro.
- The iPod nano is 6,5mm flat, 90mm high, 40mm wide and is weights only 40 heavy.
- With the iPod nano you can hear music or view pictures.
- the with which third player you can watch movies, hear music or view pictures with and you also are also able to play games on the iPod an much more is called the iPod (Video?) .
- The iPod has a memory of 30 Gigabyte or 80 Gigabyte.



Up-to-date:

- In January 2007 Apple introduced the iPhone.
- The iPhone has a big Touch screen, and a 4 or 8 Gigabyte Flash memory.
- With the iPhone you can watch Movies, hear music and do much more.
- It is about 500 Euro.
- in Europe the iPhone hits the stores in December